打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make your response clearer and more grammatical. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting reasons using linking words. Avoid redundancy and keep to 2–4 sentences. Correct grammar (verb forms, articles, word order) and use precise vocabulary (e.g., "drafts" instead of "draft").

範例: I prefer handwriting. I find that writing by hand helps me think more clearly and I can quickly rewrite notes when I change my ideas. In contrast, typing makes me slow and anxious because I tend to concentrate on correcting typos rather than my thoughts.

建議: Give a concise topic sentence and support it with specific reasons and an example. Fix grammar and collocations ("use a laptop," "portable and convenient for moving"). Use linking words like "because" and "for example" correctly. Keep to 2–3 sentences and use accurate tense and articles.

範例: I use a laptop keyboard every day because it is portable and convenient for moving between home and the office. For example, I draft emails and write reports on my laptop, which saves time compared with handwriting.

建議: Provide a clear time reference and a simple, coherent explanation. Use correct grammar for age expressions ("when I was 10 years old") and explain the learning context in a logical order. Avoid unnecessary or unclear words. Use linking words like "because" or "so" to show result.

範例: I learned to type when I was about 10 years old at primary school. We had a basic computer class where I practiced touch typing, and because I used it daily for homework and chatting, my speed and accuracy improved over time.

建議: Give a straightforward description of your improvement routine with specific details (how often, how long, what exercises). Use correct grammar (e.g., "I practice for about 50 minutes" or "50 minutes a day") and clear vocabulary ("online typing tests," "reduce mistakes"). Use linking words to connect ideas.

範例: I improve my typing by practicing online for about 50 minutes each day using typing tests and exercises. Because I used to write more by hand, developing a daily typing habit has helped me become faster and make fewer mistakes.

× 'I prefer handwriting because I can rewrite the note quickly and it's helping me to think more clearly.'

✓ 'I prefer handwriting because I can rewrite notes quickly and it helps me to think more clearly.'

'helping' is an incorrect progressive use here; use the simple present 'helps' for habitual states. Also 'the note' should be plural 'notes' for general meaning. Use simple present for repeated facts.'

× 'When I type I'm slowly at the checked my for mistake which make me nervous.'

✓ 'When I type, I slowly check for mistakes, which makes me nervous.'

'I'm slowly at the checked' is ungrammatical. The verb should be 'check' (base form) after subject and 'slowly' is an adverb modifying the verb: 'I slowly check for mistakes.' The relative clause needs 'makes' to agree with singular 'which' referring to the situation.'

× 'So usually write important draft by head.'

✓ 'So I usually write important drafts by hand.'

Missing subject 'I' and wrong preposition 'by head' should be 'by hand'. 'Draft' should be plural 'drafts' for general habit. Rearranged to correct English sentence structure.'

× 'I tips laptop keyboard every day because I use for work and study.'

✓ 'I type on my laptop keyboard every day because I use it for work and study.'

'tips' is incorrect verb form; the intended verb is 'type'. Add preposition 'on' and possessive 'my' for keyboard; include object pronoun 'it' after 'use'.'},{