打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (uh), correct grammar (use singular/plural and articles), and give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Aim for 2–3 sentences.

範例: I prefer typing to handwriting because typed text is consistently clear and easy to read. Furthermore, typing is faster for me, so I can take notes and edit documents more efficiently.

建議: Begin with a direct topic sentence, fix word order and repetition, and use linking words to add one specific detail. Avoid repeating words and include an article where needed.

範例: I use a desktop keyboard every day because I work at an office computer. As a result, I am more comfortable with the desktop layout and can type more accurately there.

建議: Provide a clear opening sentence with correct tense, remove fillers and repetitions, and give one concise supporting detail (reason or result). Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

範例: I learned to type at university when I had to write my final thesis. Because I needed to prepare and present a long report, I practised typing a lot and improved quickly.

建議: Start with a direct statement, correct grammar (article and plural forms), avoid repetition, and add a specific detail about practice routine or progress with a linking word.

範例: I improve my typing with an app called TypingClub. I practise at least ten short sessions every day, and as a result my speed and accuracy have increased steadily.

× I prefer typing rather than handwriting because uh there are many variation in handwriting.

✓ I prefer typing rather than handwriting because there are many variations in handwriting.

The noun 'variation' should be plural 'variations' to agree with 'many', which requires a plural noun. Use 'variations' when referring to multiple different handwriting styles or forms.

× Uh, sometimes it is difficult to understand someone's handwriting but typing is same for all, so it is better and perfect for understanding.

✓ Sometimes it is difficult to understand someone's handwriting, but typing is the same for everyone, so it is better and clearer for understanding.

Use 'the same' with a noun and 'for everyone' is more natural than 'for all'. 'Perfect' is too strong; 'clearer' better compares legibility. Also add a comma before 'but' to join clauses correctly.

× Everyday I use desktop keyboard as I have to work in my office in desktop.

✓ Every day I use a desktop keyboard because I have to work on a desktop in my office.

'Everyday' (adjective) should be 'Every day' (adverbial phrase). Include the article 'a' before 'desktop keyboard'. Use 'because' rather than 'as' for clearer causation. Use the preposition 'on' with 'work on a desktop' rather than 'in'.

× So for that reason I am comfortable and and I daily use the desktop keyboard.

✓ So for that reason I am comfortable, and I use the desktop keyboard daily.

Remove duplicate 'and'. Place the adverb 'daily' after the verb phrase 'use the desktop keyboard' for natural adverb placement. Add a comma before the conjunction joining independent clauses.

× Uh, when I was in university, that time for my, my final, uh, thesis, I need to make a report for the subject and for presenting my report.

✓ When I was at university, for my final thesis I needed to make a report for the course and to present it.

Use 'at university' not 'in university' in this context. Change 'need' to past tense 'needed' to match 'When I was...'. 'For the subject' is unnatural; 'for the course' is clearer. Use 'to present it' as the infinitive purpose form.

× And that time I learned typing on the keyboard first time and I really, really absorbed the typing very quickly.

✓ At that time I learned to type on the keyboard for the first time, and I picked it up very quickly.

Use 'learned to type' rather than 'learned typing'. 'For the first time' is the correct phrase order. 'Absorbed the typing' is incorrect collocation; use 'picked it up' or 'learned it' meaningfully. Maintain past tense throughout.

× I use the app which name which name is typing club.

✓ I use the app called Typing Club.

The phrase 'which name which name is' is ungrammatical. Use 'called' to introduce the name of something. Capitalize proper names as appropriate.

× I practice everyday at least ten session and I am improving my typing day by day.

✓ I practice every day with at least ten sessions, and I am improving my typing day by day.

'Everyday' should be 'every day'. 'Ten session' must be plural 'ten sessions'. Add 'with' to link the quantity to practice. The progressive 'am improving' is fine; keep it for ongoing improvement.