打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make the answer more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific reason with a linking word. Avoid repetition and correct small grammar errors (e.g., "typing lets me edit" not "let me"). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

範例: I prefer typing rather than handwriting because it is faster and much easier to edit. For example, when I’m on a tight deadline I can quickly correct or rearrange sentences on a computer, which saves a lot of time.

建議: Be slightly more specific and fluent: begin with a direct topic sentence, then add a brief reason or consequence using a linking word. Avoid unnecessary phrases like "that I have."

範例: I type every day on a desktop computer. I use a desktop because it’s the only equipment available to me at home, so I’ve grown accustomed to its keyboard and setup.

建議: Organize the answer with a clear timeline and avoid unclear phrases. Start with a topic sentence stating when you learned, then give concise supporting details with linking words. Remove unclear wording like "left with a PC set" and combine redundant points.

範例: I learned to type when I was at primary school. In addition, my mother worked in an office and often took me there, so I had extra practice on a PC and received formal lessons both at school and at her workplace.

建議: Answer directly and clearly. If you haven’t practiced formally, say so and mention what informal methods help you improve, using linking words. Correct grammar and avoid awkward phrases like "the most convenient and most fast way."

範例: I haven’t taken formal typing lessons; however, I improve my speed through daily practice at work. For instance, typing emails and reports every day has gradually increased my accuracy and speed.

× And writing can be a hassle if you make a mistake since correcting or rewriting pages takes time, whereas typing let me edit it quickly and.

✓ And writing can be a hassle if you make a mistake, since correcting or rewriting pages takes time, whereas typing lets me edit quickly.

Error type: third person singular / verb form (ID 2). The verb 'let' must agree with the singular subject 'typing' so use 'lets'. Also the final 'and' is unnecessary and was removed. Suggestion: Use subject-verb agreement: 'typing lets' and avoid redundant coordinating conjunctions at the end of a sentence.

× I have tried both, but right now I only use a desktop to type every day since it's the only equipment that I have.

✓ I have tried both, but right now I only use a desktop to type every day since it's the only equipment I have.

Error type: article errors (ID 22) and word choice. 'The only equipment that I have' is wordy; 'equipment' is an uncountable noun so 'the only equipment I have' is acceptable. Removing 'that' makes the sentence more natural. Suggestion: Omit unnecessary relative pronouns and keep uncountable nouns without plural marking.

× My mom used to work in an office and she would always bring me to work. I was left with a PC set and was taught how to use it formally.

✓ My mom used to work in an office and she would always bring me to work. I was given a PC and was taught how to use it properly.

Error type: word form / adverb usage and word choice (ID 13 and 6). 'Was left with a PC set' is awkward; 'was given a PC' is clearer. 'Formally' is incorrect here when meaning 'in the correct manner'—use 'properly'. Suggestion: Use correct verb phrases ('was given') and choose the appropriate adverb ('properly') to match intended meaning.

× I was taught how to type on a keyboard in school.

✓ I learned how to type on a keyboard at school.

Error type: tense/word choice (ID 6). While 'was taught' is grammatical, 'learned' is more natural and active for this context. Also use 'at school' instead of 'in school' for common collocation. Suggestion: Prefer active constructions ('I learned') and common prepositional collocations ('at school').

× I don't really try to improve my typing, but with my work and with constant use of computer I have been the most convenient and most fast way of typing things.

✓ I don't really try to improve my typing, but with my work and constant computer use I have become more convenient and much faster at typing.

Error type: sentence structure errors and incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs and comparative/superlative (IDs 26, 13, 25). Original uses 'the most convenient and most fast' which is incorrect: 'fast' should be an adverb 'faster' for comparison, and 'most convenient' is odd for a person. 'Have been' plus 'way of typing things' is ungrammatical. Suggested correction uses comparative forms: 'become more convenient' (consider replacing 'convenient' with a better adjective) and 'much faster at typing'. Suggestion: Use comparatives ('faster') when comparing and correct adverb/preposition patterns ('faster at typing').