打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be concise and avoid repetition; start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Correct grammar (use verb forms and prepositions) and avoid filler words.

範例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is less tiring for my hands. For example, when I write long notes by hand I often get sore fingers, but typing allows me to work faster and more comfortably.

建議: Give a direct topic sentence, then add one specific detail using linking words. Fix grammar (use present simple consistently) and avoid repeating the same phrase.

範例: I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I don't own a desktop. Also, the laptop keyboard is compact and convenient, so I find it comfortable for daily use.

建議: Provide a clear time reference and avoid fillers. Begin with a topic sentence stating when you learned, then briefly explain how you learned using one linking word. Correct tense and vocabulary (e.g. ‘learned to type’, ‘primary school’).

範例: I learned to type when I was in primary school, around Year 1 or Year 2, because we had computer classes. In those lessons we practiced basic typing exercises to improve speed and accuracy.

建議: Start with a clear statement of your main method, then give a specific example and outcome. Remove filler words and minor errors. Mention a particular website or practice routine for concreteness.

範例: I improve my typing mainly by regular practice using online tools. For example, I use typing.com and spend 20 minutes every day on drills to increase my speed and reduce errors.

× I prefer typing more than handwriting because I often feel tired and and exhausted and sore while I writing something, but I don't feel that kind of emotion and feelings when I when I when I'm typing.

✓ I prefer typing to handwriting because I often feel tired, exhausted, and sore while I am writing, but I don't feel those emotions when I'm typing.

Type 16: The sentence uses repeated conjunctions and inappropriate comparative construction 'prefer X more than Y' instead of 'prefer X to Y'. It also has duplication 'and and' and repeated fragments 'when I when I when'. Use 'prefer X to Y', remove repetitions, and use 'while I am writing' (present continuous) and 'those emotions' to refer collectively to tired, exhausted, and sore.

× So I prefer typing than handwriting.

✓ So I prefer typing to handwriting.

Type 11: 'Prefer' is followed by 'to' when comparing two things, not 'than'. Use 'prefer X to Y'.

× I type on the laptop keyboard everyday because I didn't have any desktop.

✓ I type on the laptop keyboard every day because I don't have a desktop.

Type 2: The sentence mixes tenses and uses past 'didn't have' incorrectly for a present habitual situation. Also 'everyday' (adjective) should be 'every day' (adverb). Use present simple 'don't have' for current lack.

× So I often type on the laptop keyboard everyday and I feel that the laptop keyboard is quite easy and convenience to type, so I also like the feeling of typing on the laptop keyboard.

✓ So I often type on the laptop keyboard every day and I feel that the laptop keyboard is quite easy and convenient to use, so I also like the feeling of typing on it.

Type 20: 'everyday' should be 'every day'. 'Convenience' (noun) is incorrect; use adjective 'convenient'. Also say 'easy and convenient to use' and avoid repeating 'laptop keyboard' by using 'it'.

× I learned how to toy on the keyboard when I was like, uh, uh, in the primary school, like year one or year 2 because, uh, we got the computer class to learn about how to type.

✓ I learned how to type on the keyboard when I was in primary school, around Year One or Year Two, because we had computer classes to learn how to type.

Type 5: 'toy' is a typo for 'type'. Also 'in the primary school' should be 'in primary school', and 'we got the computer class' is unnatural — use past plural 'we had computer classes'. Remove filler words and make the sequence clear.

× How can we improve our type speed, typing speed, So about that stage.

✓ How can we improve our typing speed? That was around that stage.

Type 8: Use the gerund 'typing' after 'typing speed' and form a complete question. The original sentence is fragmented and uses incorrect capitalization; rephrase into coherent sentences.

× I improve my typing through cat, uh, through keep practicing it.

✓ I improve my typing by continuously practicing it.

Type 8: 'through keep practicing' is ungrammatical. Use 'by' plus gerund 'practicing' or expressions like 'by continuously practicing'.

× Uh, there are so, for example, there's so many websites or apps that can be downloaded or can be visited on the Internet to improve your typing speed and accuracy.

✓ For example, there are many websites and apps that you can download or visit on the Internet to improve your typing speed and accuracy.

Type 26: The original sentence is disfluent and contains filler 'there are so'. Correct structure: start with 'For example,' then use 'there are many' and parallel structure 'download or visit' and consistent pronoun 'you'.

× I usually use that method to improve my typing.

✓ I usually use those methods to improve my typing.

Type 12: 'That method' refers poorly to previously mentioned 'many websites and apps'. Use plural 'those methods' or 'that method' if referring to a single approach. Here 'those methods' matches the plural antecedent.