打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Reduce repetition and organise answer with a clear topic sentence followed by one specific reason and an example. Use linking words (e.g., because, for example) and correct grammar (avoid duplicated words, use plural/singular correctly). Keep it to 2–3 concise sentences.

範例: I prefer handwriting because my handwriting is neat and easy for others to read. For example, I usually handwrite poems and short stories because writing by hand helps me think more clearly.

建議: Start with a direct answer (Yes/No or preference), then give one clear reason and a short example. Avoid contradictory phrasing (don’t say you don’t use it then prefer it without clarification). Use linking words like however or because to connect ideas.

範例: I usually use a laptop keyboard rather than a desktop because a laptop is portable and saves time. For example, I do my daily homework and routine tasks on my laptop since I can work anywhere.

建議: Give a clear time reference in simple past (e.g., when I was in seventh grade) and one concise reason why it was useful. Use correct verb tenses and avoid extra filler words.

範例: I learned to type when I was in seventh grade. From that time I practised regularly because typing became useful for my schoolwork and daily routines.

建議: Answer directly with a topic sentence, then give one or two specific methods and an example. Use correct verb forms and linking words such as by, for example, or through.

範例: I improve my typing by practising on the computer every day. For example, I type short paragraphs, poems and stories regularly to increase my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer I prefer handwriting because my handwriting is very good so every can everyone can understand my handwriting.

✓ I prefer handwriting because my handwriting is very good, so everyone can understand it.

The sentence repeats 'I prefer' and uses 'every can everyone', which is incorrect. Replace the repeated phrase with a single 'I prefer handwriting', use 'everyone' for the pronoun meaning 'all people', and replace the repeated noun 'my handwriting' with the pronoun 'it' to avoid redundancy. Add a comma before the coordinating conjunction 'so' linking two independent clauses.

× So I would like to hand write something by my hand like poems, paragraph and some story also.

✓ So I would like to handwrite things like poems, paragraphs, and some stories as well.

The phrase 'hand write something by my hand' is redundant and uses an incorrect preposition. Use the single-word verb 'handwrite'. Use plural forms for 'paragraphs' and 'stories' when giving examples. Replace 'also' with 'as well' and reorder for natural English: 'handwrite things like poems, paragraphs, and some stories as well.'

× Usually I don't use desktop or a laptop keyboard, but I would like to prefer a laptop keyboard in my everyday life because it is very useful and time saving.

✓ Usually I don't use a desktop or a laptop keyboard, but I prefer a laptop keyboard in my everyday life because it is very useful and time-saving.

The first noun phrase needs an article: 'a desktop or a laptop keyboard'. 'Would like to prefer' is ungrammatical and redundant; use 'prefer'. 'Time saving' should be hyphenated as the compound adjective 'time-saving'.

× So I like to work on a laptop keyboard and it is perfect for my daily homework and routine work.

✓ I like to work on a laptop keyboard because it is perfect for my daily homework and routine tasks.

Using 'and' to join the two clauses is acceptable but 'because' better expresses the reason. Also 'routine work' is awkward; 'routine tasks' is more natural. Remove the initial 'So' to improve formality and flow.

× When I'm in the 7th standard, I like to start working on a computer and on that day onward I would Start learning how to type on a keyboard and it is very useful for me in outer lives and routine.

✓ When I was in 7th grade, I started working on a computer, and from that day onward I began learning how to type on a keyboard; it has been very useful for my life and routine.

The time frame refers to the past, so use past tense: 'When I was in 7th grade' and 'I started'/'I began'. 'On that day onward' is better as 'from that day onward'. 'Would Start' is incorrect capitalization and misuse of 'would'; use simple past. 'Outer lives' is incorrect; use 'life' or 'daily life'. Use a semicolon or conjunction to join related clauses.

× So at that time I learn to type on a keyboard.

✓ So at that time I learned to type on a keyboard.

The action took place in the past, so use the past tense 'learned' rather than the present 'learn'.

× Mostly I improve my typing by daily practice on computer and I used to write something like some stanza paragraphs and some stories on computer and like improve my typing.

✓ Mostly I improve my typing by practicing on the computer daily; I write stanzas, paragraphs, and stories on the computer to improve my typing.

Use the gerund 'practicing' after 'by' to indicate the method. Add the article 'the' before 'computer'. 'Used to' implies a past habit and is inappropriate here; use present simple 'I write' if this is habitual now. Remove redundant words like 'some' before each noun and reorder for clarity. Use commas to separate items in a list.