打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant with good content and examples. To improve, make the response more natural by using a concise topic sentence and varied vocabulary, avoid minor repetition (e.g., “recognize my work” is unclear), and add a linking word to connect the reason and example. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

範例: I prefer typing because it’s faster and more convenient. For example, I can edit text instantly and save documents to the cloud, which makes sharing and collaborating much easier.

建議: Good direct answer and specific reasons. To improve, combine related points to avoid repetition and add a linking phrase for coherence. Use slightly more precise vocabulary (e.g., “assignments” -> “coursework” or “essays”) and aim for two to three sentences.

範例: Yes, I use my laptop keyboard every day because I attend online classes and take notes on it; moreover, I complete most of my coursework on the laptop, so it’s essential for my studies.

建議: The answer is relevant and gives a clear time reference. To improve, make the sentence more concise and natural by starting with a direct topic sentence, then add a brief detail or example with a linking word. Avoid redundant phrasing like “at that time.”

範例: I learned to type in elementary school. In a basic computer class we practiced keyboarding, which gave me a good foundation for later study.

建議: Your answer is honest and coherent, but could be improved by adding a short reflection and a possible plan to show willingness to develop. Use linking words to contrast and conclude (e.g., “however” and “therefore”), and avoid repeating “typing” too often.

範例: I haven’t practiced formally; however, I type daily for work and study, so my speed has improved gradually. In the future I plan to use online typing exercises to increase my accuracy and speed.

× I totally prefer typing because it's more convenient and faster.

✓ I totally prefer typing because it is more convenient and faster.

'It's' is a contraction of 'it is' and is acceptable in speech; however to match formal correctness and clarity in written responses, expand the contraction to 'it is'. No verb agreement error; this is a style recommendation to use full form rather than contraction in formal answers.

× For example, typing lets me edit and recognize my work quickly, and I can easily save and share documents online.

✓ For example, typing lets me edit and organize my work quickly, and I can easily save and share documents online.

The verb 'recognize' is incorrect in this context; 'recognize' means to identify something familiar. The intended meaning is likely to put things in order or make them clearer, so 'organize' (base verb) is correct. The sentence structure with 'lets me + base verb' is correct.

× Yes, I type on my laptop keyboard every day because I use it for classes and for taking notes.

✓ Yes, I type on my laptop keyboard every day because I use it for classes and for taking notes.

No grammatical error; the verbs 'type' and 'use' agree with the subject 'I'. This entry is left unchanged; included to explicitly confirm correctness.

× I also complete most of my assignments on my laptop so it's essential for my studies.

✓ I also complete most of my assignments on my laptop, so it is essential for my studies.

Add a comma before the coordinating conjunction 'so' to join two independent clauses. Also expand the contraction 'it's' to 'it is' for formal clarity.

× When I was in elementary school, there was a class that mainly taught how to use computers and I learned how to type on a keyboard at that time.

✓ When I was in elementary school, there was a class that mainly taught how to use computers, and I learned how to type on a keyboard then.

The original sentence is grammatically acceptable, but improved by adding a comma before 'and' to separate clauses and replacing the redundant phrase 'at that time' with 'then' for brevity and naturalness. 'There was a class' correctly uses 'there be' structure.

× I have not made any effort to improve my typing, but I type on my laptop every day for work and study, so my typing has improved naturally over time.

✓ I have not made any deliberate effort to improve my typing, but I type on my laptop every day for work and study, so my typing has improved naturally over time.

The sentence is largely correct. I added 'deliberate' to clarify the meaning (optional). Tenses are appropriate: present perfect 'have not made' to indicate past to present, present simple 'type' for habitual action, and present perfect 'has improved' for change up to now. No grammatical correction needed beyond style.