打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答要更直接并注意语法和句子连贯性。避免重复词汇（如“to to typing”），把原因具体化并使用连接词使表达更自然。例如说明在哪些场合喜欢手写、手写带来的具体好处，并把时态和词形用对。

範例: I prefer handwriting. Because I spend a lot of time on the computer for work, writing by hand helps me relax and focus. For example, when I take notes during meetings, handwriting makes it easier for me to remember key points.

建議: 回答要使用一致的时态并更清晰地表达职业背景和个人感受。避免语法错误（如“typed”“we need use computer”）。可以说明具体任务和为何感到疲劳，以及简短的连接词使句子流畅。

範例: Yes, I use a laptop keyboard every day. My major is design, so I spend many hours using design software, which requires constant typing and shortcuts. As a result, it can feel tiring after long sessions.

建議: 需要清楚地给出时间点并用正确的语法表达。避免语气词过多（如“uh”）和人称错误（如“their”）。用一句话说明年龄和场合，再加一句补充细节或记忆以丰富内容。

範例: I started learning to type when I was about eight years old. My primary school had computer classes, and it was the first time I learned basic typing and how to use the keyboard.

建議: 回答要更具体，给出可行的方法而不是笼统观点。修正语法（如“more and more better”），并使用连接词列举方法（如练习网站、正确指法、定时练习）。尽量用两到三句说明方法和效果。

範例: I improve my typing by practicing regularly and focusing on proper finger placement. I also use online typing tests to track my speed and accuracy, and I set aside 10–15 minutes every day to do targeted exercises.

× I prefer handwriting because in my daily life I have many time to face my computer.

✓ I prefer handwriting because in my daily life I have a lot of time in front of my computer.

该句中的“many time”用法不正确。time 作为不可数名词时应使用“a lot of time”或“much time”；此外“to face my computer”不地道，改为“in front of my computer”。建议：遇到不可数名词（如 time, information）时，用“a lot of / much / some”等量词，且短语搭配注意固定表达。

× Therefore I don't want to use more time to to typing and I think handwriting can let me calm down and focus on the paper.

✓ Therefore I don't want to spend more time typing and I think handwriting helps me calm down and focus on the paper.

句中有多个问题，但按要求只修改符合列表的类型："use more time to to typing" 中要用动词短语"spend time doing sth."替换不定式结构。另外有重复的“to”。“let me calm down”更自然为“helps me calm down”。建议：记住固定搭配“spend time doing something”，避免多余的“to”，用更自然的动词（help/allow）。

× Yes, of course I typed on the laptop keyboard every day because my major is our design and we need use computer every day.

✓ Yes, of course I type on the laptop keyboard every day because my major is design and we need to use computers every day.

原句使用“typed”是过去式，但句意描述习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时“type”。此外“is our design”结构错误，改为“major is design”；“need use computer”缺不定式和复数，改为“need to use computers”。建议：描述日常习惯用一般现在时，注意不定式“need to do”和名词单复数一致。

× Therefore I always to use keyboard.

✓ Therefore I always use the keyboard.

原句中有多余的“不定式标记”to，应直接用动词“use”。同时“keyboard”前一般加定冠词“the”。建议：副词“always”后直接接动词原形（一般现在时），注意冠词使用。

× But I also think typing is very tired.

✓ But I also think typing is very tiring.

“tired”是形容人感到疲惫，表示被动感受；描述事物让人感到疲惫时应使用现在分词形容词“tiring”。建议：分清“tired”（感到累的人）与“tiring”（让人感到累的事物）。

× Maybe in my 8 years old began to learn use type on their keyboard, uh, because at that time in my school it have computer class and uh, this is my first time to you.

✓ Maybe when I was 8 years old I began to learn to type on the keyboard, because at that time my school had computer classes and that was my first time using one.

句子包含多个问题，按列表优先修改“there be issue”对应的“it have computer class”部分：原句用“it have”主谓不一致且时态错误，应为“my school had computer classes”。同时整体改正了时间表达“when I was 8 years old”、“learn to type”、“first time using one”。建议：表达年龄时用“when I was + 年龄”；“learn to do sth.”是固定搭配；表示过去存在某物用过去式“had”。

× How do you improve your typing? It seemed to me that we don't need special training to improve our typing skills because we use computer every day.

✓ It seems to me that we don't need special training to improve our typing skills because we use computers every day.

原句“It seemed to me”使用了过去式，与后句“we don't need”时态不一致，且不符合上下文（一般现在时观点），应为“It seems to me”。另外“use computer”需要复数“computers”。建议：表达一般观点用一般现在时，注意主句和从句时态一致，名词复数形式。

× If we spend many times to typing, I think the skills can improve more and more better.

✓ If we spend a lot of time typing, I think our skills can improve more and more.

“many times”用于可数复数，原意应为“很多时间”，应使用“a lot of time”或“much time”。“to typing”应改为动名词“typing”直接接在 spend time 后；“more and more better”是冗余且错误的比较级，应为“improve more and more”或“get better and better”。建议：记住“spend time doing sth.”结构；不可数名词使用“a lot of/much”；比较级不用重复“more”和“-er”。