打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达了对不同书写方式的偏好，但语言不够简洁，存在重复和填充词（如 umm、I I），句子结构有小错误（如 "rather to" 应为 "rather" 或 "prefer to"）。建议： 1) 删减填充词，保持句子流利； 2) 用更直接的主题句开头（例如："I prefer handwriting for Chinese and typing for English."）； 3) 用一到两个具体原因支持观点，使用链接词（because, so, while）。 4) 注意语法：使用正确的固定搭配（prefer to do, feel how the character is shaped）。

範例: I prefer handwriting when I write Chinese because I like to feel the shape of each character, while I usually type in English on my phone because it's faster and easier to edit.

建議: 回答含混且有重复（"use more use use"），逻辑不够清晰。需要直接回答问题并给出清楚的原因和细节。建议： 1) 直接说明是否每天使用键盘（Yes/No）； 2) 解释原因时用简明句子并用连接词（because, so）； 3) 提供具体的替代方式或频率（e.g. I write my diary by hand every night）。

範例: No, I don't. I try to avoid screens, so I handwrite my diary every night instead of typing on a computer because I find scrolling distracting.

建議: 回答较为完整且包含原因，但有小语法问题（"starting" 应为 "had started" 或 "were starting"；重复词 "to to"）。建议： 1) 用更准确的时态表达过去发生的动作； 2) 去掉重复并用一两句支持细节； 3) 可补充一个具体例子（如 who taught you or how you practised）。

範例: I learned to type when I was about seven or eight because my friends had started using WeChat, so it became necessary to communicate. I practiced by chatting with classmates and copying messages until I got faster.

建議: 回答有内容但不够具体，有重复及填充词，语法时态和词形错误（"it take" 应为 "I had to spend more time" 或 "it took"）。建议： 1) 直接说明你现在如何提高（练习方法、工具、频率）； 2) 给出具体的练习细节（例如使用打字练习软件、每天练习多长时间）； 3) 减少填充词，句子保持清晰和连贯。

範例: I improved my typing by practicing regularly: I used an online typing tutor for 20 minutes a day and focused on touch-typing exercises, which helped me increase speed and accuracy.

× While that depends on which kind of language in my writing, if I'm writing Chinese characters, I'd rather to umm, feel how the character shaped itself.

✓ While that depends on which kind of language I'm writing in. If I'm writing Chinese characters, I'd rather feel how the character shapes itself.

句子包含动词不定式后不应跟“to”在“would rather”结构中；此外“depends on which kind of language in my writing”中缺少介词“in”位置不当，且时态与一般现在陈述习惯用现在时。建议将“would rather to”改为“would rather + 动词原形”，并调整介词位置；“shaped itself”应为一般现在时“shapes itself”，表示习惯或普遍情况。

× But if I'm writing umm, English or English characters, English words or essays, I I, I, I'd rather to type them on my phone.

✓ But if I'm writing English — English words or essays — I'd rather type them on my phone.

同样是“would rather”结构，后接动词原形，不要加“to”；此外去掉多余重复词并整理插入语使句子更流畅。建议记住“would rather + 动词原形”，不要用“to”。

× No, actually, because I want to write my diary every day and these days I'm trying to use more use use less time on my screen because I couldn't help myself scrolling on them.

✓ No, actually. I want to write in my diary every day, and these days I'm trying to use less time on my screen because I can't help scrolling on it.

句中存在现在时与过去时混用问题；“couldn't help myself scrolling on them”时态与上下文不符，应为现在时“can't help scrolling”。此外“diary”前通常搭配介词“in”；“screen”作为单数更自然，且“scrolling”后不需“on them”。建议统一使用现在时态表达当前习惯，并注意介词搭配和代词一致。

× I learned it when I was 7 or 8 years old because during that time my classmates and friends starting to use WeChat to chat with each other on their phones.

✓ I learned it when I was 7 or 8 years old because during that time my classmates and friends started to use WeChat to chat with each other on their phones.

“starting to use”与前面的过去时“learned”时态不一致，应使用过去式“started”表示在过去发生的动作。建议将动词统一为过去时以保持时态一致。

× So it's very necessary for everyone to learn how to type to to connect with others and keep in touch.

✓ So it's very necessary for everyone to learn how to type to connect with others and keep in touch.

多余重复“to to”应删除一个；不影响时态，但需注意不重复不定式标记。建议检查书写以避免重复。

× I actually never thought about this question because at the beginning I just use only two fingers to type on the keyboard.

✓ I actually never thought about this question because at the beginning I just used only two fingers to type on the keyboard.

句首“never thought”为过去时，后半句应与之对应使用过去时“used”，保持时态一致。建议在叙述过去经历时统一使用过去时态。

× But umm, when I feel that I have a lot to say or I need to type a lot to write my essays or novels, it take more time to practice it.

✓ But when I feel that I have a lot to say or need to type a lot to write my essays or novels, it takes more time to practice.

主语“it”与动词“take”不一致，正确为第三人称单数“takes”。此外“practice it”中的“it”可以省略，使句子更自然。建议注意主谓一致并简化不必要的代词。