打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Reduce hesitation and redundancy; start with a clear topic sentence then give one or two specific reasons with a linking word. Avoid filler words like "uh" and repetitive phrases such as "and further."

範例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is much more efficient. For example, I can quickly correct mistakes and reorganize paragraphs when taking notes, which saves time and improves clarity.

建議: Give a direct opening sentence naming the device, then add one specific reason and a brief example. Remove vague statements and fillers, and use a linking word to connect ideas.

範例: I usually type on a laptop keyboard because it’s portable and convenient. For instance, I can work from different rooms or cafés without carrying heavy equipment.

建議: Open with a concise time phrase, then explain the context with a specific detail and avoid casual expressions like "soft spot" or filler sounds. Use a linking word to clarify reason.

範例: I learned to type in Year 8 when I took computer classes at school, so I had regular practice on typing software. Because I enjoyed the exercises, my speed improved quickly.

建議: Give a clear topic sentence about your method, then list one or two specific activities with linking words and a short result. Be concise and avoid repetition of similar phrases.

範例: I improve my typing by practicing regularly on my laptop. For example, I keep a daily digital journal and type my to-do lists, which has increased both my speed and accuracy over time.

× If I had to pick, I'd lean towards typing because I think typing is, uh, really efficient and it doesn't require a lot of effort.

✓ If I had to pick, I'd lean towards typing because I think typing is really efficient and it doesn't require a lot of effort.

Remove filler 'uh' and unnecessary comma; this is not a present participle error but the sentence contained disfluency. The content tense and forms are correct; improving fluency makes it grammatically cleaner.

× And further, if we want to edit any notes, it's very easy to edit as compared to handwriting.

✓ And furthermore, if we want to edit any notes, it's much easier to edit them than handwriting.

Use 'furthermore' or 'and further' for transition and replace 'as compared to' with 'than' for direct comparison. Also include object 'them' to refer to 'notes' for clarity.

× I type on a laptop keyboard mostly and uh, I think it's really good to use a laptop because it's very convenient in day-to-day life.

✓ I mostly type on a laptop keyboard, and I think it's very good to use a laptop because it's very convenient in day-to-day life.

Move 'mostly' to natural position before verb. Added comma before conjunction for clarity and removed filler 'uh'. The articles are acceptable; adjustment improves word order.

× In modern world, it has actually become our, uh, daily access to things.

✓ In the modern world, it has actually become our daily means of accessing many things.

Include definite article 'the' with 'modern world'. 'Daily access to things' is awkward; 'means of accessing many things' is clearer. Removed filler 'uh'.

× Well, I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was in my year 8, and I learned it because I used to attend computer classes.

✓ Well, I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was in Year 8, and I learned it because I attended computer classes.

Use 'attended' instead of 'used to attend' because a specific past event is described; 'used to' implies a habitual past with no clear end. Capitalize 'Year 8' and omit extra repetition 'and I learned it' could remain but simplified.

× I always had this, uh, soft spot for learning how to type because I find it fun and easy.

✓ I always had a soft spot for learning how to type because I found it fun and easy.

Stay consistent in tense: 'had' (past) pairs with 'found' (past). Removed filler 'uh' and changed 'this' to 'a' for natural expression.

× I like to keep practicing and I mostly write journals and also I write down my everyday routines as in we maintain a diary, but I like to maintain something like this on a laptop to write down quickly and efficiently which helps.

✓ I like to keep practicing: I mostly write journals and record my everyday routines. We maintain a diary, but I prefer to keep something like this on a laptop so I can write quickly and efficiently, which helps.

Improved gerund/infinitive and sentence structure: 'keep practicing' is fine; separated ideas into clearer clauses. Use 'prefer' for preference and 'so I can' to show purpose. This fixes awkward phrasing and improves flow while keeping verb forms appropriate.