打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and organised: start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give one or two specific reasons. Avoid filler words (uh, I mean) and contradictory phrases. Use correct collocations (e.g. "type on a computer" not "type to the paper").

範例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and helps me organise ideas clearly. For example, when I type on my laptop I can edit sentences quickly and save different drafts, which makes writing assignments easier.

建議: Give a clear, grammatically correct answer with specific details. Begin with the main statement (desktop or laptop), then explain when and why. Eliminate hesitations and incorrect verb forms. Use linking words like 'usually' and 'sometimes' correctly.

範例: I usually type on a desktop computer at home because I find the larger screen more comfortable for studying. Sometimes I use my laptop when I go to a café or the library for convenience.

建議: Provide a clear time reference and correct past tense. Start with a direct time statement, then briefly explain how you learned and what practice you did. Keep sentences short and accurate.

範例: I learned to type in high school. My teacher gave me a laptop and asked us to practise typing three to five sentences every day, so I began regular practice in 2020.

建議: Be specific and structured: state your main method, give exact routines or tools, and show improvement with measurable results. Use correct plural forms and time expressions. Avoid fillers.

範例: I improve my typing by practising regularly with online typing exercises. I type five to nine sentences every few hours and use a typing tutor to track speed; as a result I can now type about 100 words per minute after consistent practice.

× Actually, I prefer typing because in my opinion typing is very small, very helpful and smoothly to, uh, get my idea directly to the paper, to the disc, I mean, not the paper, because now I prefer the typing.

✓ Actually, I prefer typing because, in my opinion, typing is very simple, very helpful and smooth for getting my ideas directly onto the screen, not paper, because now I prefer typing.

The student used incorrect adjective and adverb forms: 'small' is wrong for 'simple'; 'smoothly to get' mixes an adverb with an infinitive incorrectly. Use the adjective 'smooth' to describe the process and the preposition 'for' plus a gerund or 'to' plus infinitive. Also 'idea' should be plural as 'ideas' and 'to the paper, to the disc' is awkward; use 'onto the screen'. Suggestion: choose correct adjective/adverb forms and consistent verb patterns, e.g. 'smooth' (adjective) with 'for getting' or 'smoothly' (adverb) with a verb: 'smoothly get'.

× Usually I is I, uh, take the desktop, uh, such as iPad, uh, to doing my, uh, exercise, uh, to doing my homework and exercise.

✓ Usually I use a desktop, such as an iPad, to do my exercises and homework.

The sentence has subject-verb agreement and verb form errors: 'I is I' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'use'. 'to doing' should be 'to do' (infinitive after 'to'). 'exercise' should be plural 'exercises' or 'exercise' depending on meaning. Also 'desktop' and 'iPad' are confused; an iPad is a tablet, not a desktop—keep 'desktop' or 'iPad' consistently. Suggestion: use correct verb for subject and infinitive form after 'to'.

× And I usually lighten the desktop, uh, and uh, uh, sometime laptop.

✓ And I usually lighten the desktop, and sometimes use a laptop.

The verb 'lighten' is incorrect in this context; likely the student meant 'liken' (no) or 'use'. Use 'sometimes' (adverb) rather than 'sometime'. Also include the verb 'use' with both devices. Suggestion: choose the correct verb ('use') and the correct adverb ('sometimes').

× When I was in high school, my teacher was give me a laptop and he said every day you should to do an exercise three to five sentence and I started from 2020.

✓ When I was in high school, my teacher gave me a laptop and he said, 'Every day you should do an exercise of three to five sentences.' I started in 2020.

The past tense was mixed incorrectly: 'was give' is wrong; the simple past 'gave' is required. After 'should' the base verb 'do' is used (not 'to do'). 'Three to five sentence' needs plural 'sentences' and a clearer expression 'an exercise of three to five sentences'. 'I started from 2020' should be 'I started in 2020.' Suggestion: use simple past for completed actions and correct verb forms after modal verbs; make plural nouns where needed.

× Actually, I usually do an exercise uh 5 to 9 sentence every three to four hours, and now I can write everything smoothly and easily uh to reach 100 sentence in one hour.

✓ Actually, I usually do exercises of 5 to 9 sentences every three to four hours, and now I can write smoothly and easily, reaching 100 sentences in one hour.

Use plural 'exercises' and 'sentences' for counts. The phrase 'to reach' after a comma is better as a gerund clause 'reaching' to show result. Also 'write everything smoothly and easily' is awkward—'write smoothly and easily' suffices. Suggestion: use -ing form for participle clauses showing result ('reaching') and ensure noun plurals for counts.