打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise, correct grammar and pronunciation errors, and include one specific reason with linking words. Keep answer within 2–4 sentences.

範例: I prefer handwriting because it helps me remember details better. For example, when I take notes by hand I tend to process information more deeply, so I recall facts from lectures more easily.

建議: Answer directly, fix grammar, and use linking words to explain frequency and reason. Be specific about which device and how often you use it.

範例: I don't type every day; I only use a laptop occasionally, about two or three times a week. At work we mostly use touchscreen devices now, so I rarely need a physical keyboard.

建議: Provide a clear topic sentence with correct tense and a brief supporting detail (exact age, setting). Avoid filler words and hesitations.

範例: I learned to type when I was about 12 years old. My school offered a computer course that taught basic typing skills, and we practiced regularly during that class.

建議: Give a clear, specific method and example of practice with linking words. Use concrete strategies and correct grammar.

範例: I improve my typing by practising regularly with online typing exercises and timed drills. For instance, I spend 10 minutes a day on a typing website to increase my speed and accuracy over time.

× I personally prefer handwriting because writing easy for me to remember every details I work so yeah I think hairwriting is more suitable for me.

✓ I personally prefer handwriting because writing is easy for me to remember every detail I work on, so yes, I think handwriting is more suitable for me.

Missing verb 'is' after 'writing' and incorrect adjective/plural forms: 'every details' should be 'every detail'. 'I work' needs a preposition 'on'. 'hairwriting' is a spelling error corrected to 'handwriting'. Also 'yeah' changed to 'yes' for formality. Suggestion: Ensure a verb follows subjects, use singular 'detail' after 'every', and include necessary prepositions.

× Not every day, I only use laptop once a while due to the technology at once most of the laptop already can be used screen touch. So yeah, even at my workplace also we use the screen touch.

✓ Not every day; I only use a laptop once in a while. Because of advances in technology, most laptops now have touchscreens. So yes, even at my workplace we use touchscreens.

Problems: missing articles ('a laptop'), wrong adverbial phrase 'once a while' should be 'once in a while', awkward clause 'due to the technology at once' rephrased to 'because of advances in technology', plural agreement 'most of the laptop' -> 'most laptops', and noun form 'screen touch' -> 'touchscreen' or 'touchscreens'. Suggestion: Use correct idiomatic adverbial phrases and appropriate articles; ensure noun plurality and proper compound nouns.

× When I was a youth, I think around 12 years old, I start to learn how to type on the keyboard because that time my school have uh, one class is for the computer course, so we learn how to type on that time.

✓ When I was young, I think around 12 years old, I started to learn how to type on the keyboard because at that time my school had one class for the computer course, so we learned how to type then.

Tense errors: 'start' should be past 'started'; 'have' should be past 'had'; 'we learn' should be 'we learned'. Word choice: 'a youth' -> 'young', 'that time' -> 'at that time' or 'then'. Suggestion: Keep past-tense verbs consistent when describing past events and use natural collocations like 'at that time' and 'we learned then'.

× In my opinion, I think if we keep using the keyboard to type so you can type faster.

✓ In my opinion, if we keep using the keyboard to type, we can type faster.

Sentence structure and tense alignment: The original mixes subjects ('we' and 'you') and includes an unnecessary 'so'. Use consistent subject 'we' and present simple/modal 'can' for result. Suggestion: Match subjects and use conditional structure 'if... , ...' without 'so' in the middle.

× As long as you keep doing then everything will go smooth.

✓ As long as you keep practicing, everything will go smoothly.

Sentence structure and word form: 'keep doing' is vague—use 'keep practicing' for typing. 'then' is unnecessary after the condition. 'go smooth' should be adverb 'go smoothly'. Suggestion: Use specific verbs and correct adverb forms, and omit redundant words in conditional sentences.