打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting reasons with a linking word. Watch verb tense and phrasing (e.g., “I’m used to preparing” not “I used to prepare”).

範例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it’s much faster and more convenient. For example, I type notes and documents daily, which saves a lot of time and makes editing easier.

建議: Provide a clear topic sentence and improve grammar and word choice. Use linking words to combine reasons and add a brief specific example of where you carry it. Avoid redundancy (don’t repeat ‘laptop’).

範例: I usually type on a laptop because it’s portable and convenient. For instance, I take it to the library and cafés, and I also find it comfortable to use at home.

建議: Remove filler words and correct grammar. Give a clear time reference and one concise reason or context. Use past simple correctly (e.g., “I learned” not “I used to learn”) and avoid unclear phrases like ‘part of our label.’

範例: I learned to type during senior secondary school. At that time, typing assignments and reports was part of the coursework, so I started practicing regularly.

建議: Be more concise and correct word choice: use ‘improve’ and ‘practice’ instead of ‘reputation.’ Start with a topic sentence, then give a specific method or tool (e.g., lessons, online exercises) and a brief result.

範例: I improved my typing by practicing every day and using online typing exercises. As a result, my speed and accuracy improved noticeably over a few months.

× Well, I prefer typing because it is much faster and more convenient as I used to prepare documents and notes every day.

✓ Well, I prefer typing because it is much faster and more convenient since I prepare documents and notes every day.

The original uses 'used to' which indicates a past habitual action; the context describes a current habitual activity so present simple 'prepare' is correct. Also 'as' is better replaced with 'since' for causal meaning. Suggestion: use present simple for current routines and use 'since' or 'because' for reasons.

× Well I use a laptop for typing because laptop is portable and I carry it to different places and also I use it very comfortable at home.

✓ Well, I use a laptop for typing because a laptop is portable and I carry it to different places, and I find it very comfortable at home.

The noun 'laptop' needs an article ('a laptop') when singular and countable. 'Use it very comfortable' is incorrect because 'comfortable' is an adjective; after 'find' or with 'feel' is required: 'find it very comfortable' or 'it is very comfortable'. Suggestion: add the article and use 'find it comfortable' or 'it is comfortable'.

× As far as I can recall, I uh, used to learn typing on keyboard when I was in senior secondary, uh, education.

✓ As far as I can recall, I used to learn typing on the keyboard when I was in senior secondary school.

'Used to' correctly indicates a past habit, but 'on keyboard' needs the definite article 'the keyboard'. 'Senior secondary' should be 'senior secondary school' for clarity. Also remove filler 'uh'. Suggestion: include 'the' with specific instruments and use full noun phrases for clarity.

× At that time, I used to submitted, uh, uh, documents and notes as it was a part of our label.

✓ At that time, I used to submit documents and notes as it was a part of our lab work.

Mixing 'used to' with past participle 'submitted' is incorrect; after 'used to' the base form 'submit' must be used. 'Label' appears to be a wrong word choice; likely 'lab' or 'laboratory work' or 'lab work' is intended. Remove filler 'uh'. Suggestion: use 'used to' + base verb and choose the correct noun ('lab work').

× So that was the time when I started learning typing.

✓ So that was the time when I started learning to type.

'Learning typing' is non-idiomatic in English; the correct form is 'learning to type' or 'learning typing' can be 'learning typing' rarely used. Use the infinitive 'to type' after 'learning' to indicate the skill acquired. Suggestion: say 'learned to type' or 'started learning to type'.

× Well, I used to type every day and this helped me a lot improve my typing speed naturally and with consistent practice and reputation it made a noticeable difference.

✓ Well, I typed every day and this helped me improve my typing speed; with consistent practice and repetition, it made a noticeable difference.

The original mixes 'used to' with past simple inconsistently; if the habit is past, 'used to type' is acceptable but then follow with correct structure. 'Helped me a lot improve' is missing 'to' before the verb or should be 'helped me improve'. 'Reputation' is the wrong word; 'repetition' is intended. Suggestion: use 'helped me improve' or 'helped me to improve' and correct word choice to 'repetition', ensure consistent past tense if describing past practice.