打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and correct grammar; start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and small hesitations. Also correct awkward phrases (e.g. “write on the rule” -> “write within the lines”) and use comparative phrase correctly (e.g. “prefer handwriting to typing”).

範例: I prefer handwriting to typing because it relaxes me and helps me think more clearly. For example, I enjoy using different colored pens and keeping my notes neat, which makes study sessions more enjoyable and memorable.

建議: Open with a direct answer, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Fix grammar (e.g. “a laptop keyboard,” “I ordered it from Shein,” “I enjoy using that keyboard”). Avoid redundant sentences and finish with a concise point about frequency or habit.

範例: I usually type on a laptop keyboard because I work from my laptop most days. I bought a pink, backlit keyboard from Shein, and I enjoy using it since the lights and color make long typing sessions more pleasant.

建議: Provide a clear time reference in the topic sentence and avoid trailing off. Use past tense consistently for past events, and include one specific detail about the learning method and result. Remove irrelevant comments about feelings unless brief and connected.

範例: I learned to type when I was about eight years old by practicing with paper keyboard charts and copying letters. After a few weeks of patient practice I became reasonably fast and accurate, which helped me with schoolwork.

建議: Start with a direct statement of your routine, then use linking words (for example, “for example,” “when”) to explain specific methods and how you deal with fatigue. Use more natural phrases (e.g. “take a short break to refresh”) and avoid repetition.

範例: I improve my typing by practising regularly with online programs and timed exercises to build speed and accuracy. When I feel tired I take a short break to refresh, and then I return focused to continue the drills.

× Actually I prefer handwriting.

✓ Actually, I prefer handwriting.

Add comma after introductory adverb 'Actually' for clarity; sentence correct otherwise. Use a comma after introductory words to improve sentence flow.

× It makes me happy and my handwriting is very beautiful and neat.

✓ It makes me happy, and my handwriting is very neat and beautiful.

The original sentence is understandable but the word order 'very beautiful and neat' is awkward; placing 'neat' before 'beautiful' or reordering for parallel adjectives is clearer. Also add a comma before coordinating conjunction 'and' joining two independent clauses.

× I can write on the rule.

✓ I can write within the lines.

'Write on the rule' is unidiomatic. Likely intended meaning is keeping writing within ruled lines, so use 'within the lines' for correct idiomatic expression.

× So I I like to do the handwriting.

✓ So I like doing handwriting.

Remove duplicated 'I'. Use gerund 'doing handwriting' or 'writing by hand' instead of 'do the handwriting' for natural English and correct verb form.

× I can use different colours of pens.

✓ I can use pens of different colors.

Original is acceptable but mildly awkward. Reordering yields more natural phrasing. Also use consistent spelling depending on variety of English; 'colours' (BrE) is acceptable if using British English.

× So I enjoy doing the handwriting than typing so.

✓ So I enjoy handwriting more than typing.

Use comparative structure 'more than' to compare activities; remove redundant 'so' and change 'doing the handwriting' to 'handwriting' for natural phrasing.

× I usually use laptop keyboard.

✓ I usually use a laptop keyboard.

Countable singular noun 'laptop keyboard' requires an article 'a' unless speaking generally with plural or uncountable form.

× I ordered that keyboard from Sheen.

✓ I ordered that keyboard from Shein.

Assuming the proper noun is the brand 'Shein'; correct spelling of proper noun fixes the preposition use. Preposition 'from' is correct for purchase source.

× It's very pinkish color keyboard and it has some colorful light, so I like to use that keyboard.

✓ It's a very pink keyboard and it has colorful lights, so I like to use it.

Use article 'a' before 'very pink keyboard'; 'pinkish color keyboard' is awkward—use 'very pink keyboard'. 'Colorful light' should be plural 'lights' if there are multiple lights. Replace redundant 'that keyboard' with pronoun 'it'.

× It makes me happy and I'm enjoying use that keyboard while I'm typing or completing.

✓ It makes me happy, and I enjoy using that keyboard while I'm typing or completing tasks.

Use simple present 'I enjoy' for habitual action rather than 'I'm enjoying'. Use gerund 'using' after 'enjoy'. Add object 'tasks' after 'completing' to complete the verb and make sentence grammatical.

× I learned to type when I was a child by practicing with paper copies of the keyboard and copying the letter.

✓ I learned to type when I was a child by practicing with paper copies of the keyboard and copying the letters.

Use plural 'letters' if copying many letters; past tense 'learned' is correct. Ensure plurality matches context.

× I practice patiently for several weeks and now I can type reasonably quickly and the.

✓ I practiced patiently for several weeks, and now I can type reasonably quickly.

Sequence of past practice leading to present ability requires past tense 'practiced' for the period 'for several weeks'. Remove stray 'and the.'

× The important thing is it make me happy and I'm enjoying my.

✓ The important thing is that it makes me happy, and I enjoy it.

Add 'that' to introduce content clause. Use 'makes' (third person singular) to agree with subject 'it'. Replace 'I'm enjoying my' with 'I enjoy it' and remove incomplete possessive 'my'.

× I practice typing regularly using online task, online programs and timed exercises which help me to increase my typing ability.

✓ I practice typing regularly using online tasks, online programs, and timed exercises which help me improve my typing ability.

Use plural 'tasks'. 'Help me to increase my typing ability' is grammatical but more natural as 'help me improve my typing ability'.

× Sometimes I get tired, then I take a break, just fresh refresh and back to work.

✓ Sometimes I get tired, so I take a break to refresh and then get back to work.

Original has ungrammatical phrasing 'just fresh refresh and back to work.' Use 'to refresh' (infinitive) and sequence words 'then get back to work' for clarity.

× I just focused on my task.

✓ I just focus on my task.

If describing habitual/current action, use present simple 'focus'. If referring to a past event, use 'focused'; choose tense to match context. Changed to present simple to match other present-tense statements.