打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and fluent: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, correct small grammar errors, and add a brief reason with one specific detail. Use linking words (for example, because/so) to connect ideas. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

範例: I prefer handwriting because I grew up in a rural area without much access to computers. However, I’m learning to type now so I can work more efficiently for study and future jobs.

建議: Answer directly and clearly: give one clear sentence saying whether you type daily and on which device, then explain briefly with a specific reason. Remove filler sounds and contradictory phrases. Keep to 2 sentences maximum.

範例: I rarely type every day; when I do I usually use a laptop rather than a desktop because my school and home only have portable laptops. Most of the time I write by hand, so I don’t get much practice typing.

建議: Give a clear time frame and avoid uncertainty: state the exact time (middle school or high school), correct repetition and incomplete ending, and add a brief detail about the class or course. Use linking words like when/at that time.

範例: I learned to type during middle school in our computer class. At that time the teacher showed us basic touch-typing techniques and we practiced with simple exercises.

建議: Structure your answer: start with a topic sentence about the main method, then give 1–2 specific supporting details (which websites or exercises, how often). Avoid repetition and vague phrases. Use linking words (for example, for instance, also).

範例: I improve my typing mainly by taking online typing courses and practicing daily on typing websites. For instance, I use a free site to do timed exercises for 15–20 minutes every day, which helps increase my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer handwriting because I I grew up in a rural area and we don't have any opportunities to type in computers or et cetera.

✓ I prefer handwriting because I grew up in a rural area and we didn't have opportunities to use computers to type.

The sentence contains a repeated pronoun 'I I' (typo) and inconsistent tense: speaker refers to past situation, so use past tense 'didn't have'. 'Any opportunities to type in computers' is unidiomatic; use 'opportunities to use computers to type'. Remove filler 'or et cetera' for clarity. Suggestion: proofread to remove duplicate words and match tense between clauses.

× And now I'm trying to learn quickly about typing.

✓ And now I'm trying to learn typing quickly.

Word order: 'learn quickly about typing' is awkward. Use 'learn typing quickly' or 'learn to type quickly'. Maintain present continuous 'I'm trying' correctly. Suggestion: place adverb after the object or use 'learn to type quickly'.

× Uh, MMM, I type on a laptop very often, very rare.

✓ I type on a laptop very rarely.

Conflicting adverb phrases 'very often' and 'very rare' cause confusion. Use a single correct adverb 'very rarely' or 'not very often'. Also 'rare' is an adjective; use adverb 'rarely'. Suggestion: choose one adverb and correct form.

× And because we have to write everything by our hand.

✓ Because we have to write everything by hand.

Use the idiomatic phrase 'by hand' not 'by our hand'. The conjunction 'And' at sentence start is unnecessary. Suggestion: omit 'our' and start sentence with 'Because' or connect properly to previous sentence.

× I learned to type on the keyboards in my high school or my middle school in in information subject, technological and.

✓ I learned to type on keyboards in middle school and high school in information technology classes.

Tense 'learned' is fine, but phrase 'on the keyboards' should be 'on keyboards' or 'on the keyboard'. 'My high school or my middle school' is unclear; list both. 'Information subject, technological' is ungrammatical—use 'information technology classes'. Remove duplicate 'in'. Suggestion: use clear noun phrases and common course names.

× To improve my typing I use lots of techniques like online, online typing classes or in most.

✓ To improve my typing I use many techniques, such as online typing classes and practice most of the time.

Problems: 'lots of' informal but acceptable; 'online, online typing classes or in most' is ungrammatical and repetitive. Use 'such as online typing classes' and clarify 'most of the time' or 'usually'. Also place comma after introductory phrase. Suggestion: avoid repetition and finish comparative phrase properly.

× And most and I practice everyday. I think it's most convenient.

✓ I practice every day. I think it's the most convenient way.

Remove repeated 'And most and'. 'Everyday' is adjective; use adverb 'every day'. 'Most convenient' needs a noun reference; add 'way' to be clear. Suggestion: avoid repetition, use correct adverb form, and supply the noun for comparison.