打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Сократите повторения, используйте более точные формулировки и логическую структуру: сначала краткий прямой ответ, затем одно-два конкретных обоснования с связками. Уточните фразу "decide tasks" — вероятно, вы имели в виду "organize/decide on tasks" или "manage tasks".

範例: I prefer typing. It’s faster and more efficient for studying and work, because I can organize my tasks quickly and edit documents easily.

建議: Уберите лишние или непонятные слова (например, "starting and walk"), используйте правильные глагольные формы и свяжите идеи: сказать, что вы используете ноутбук, почему это удобно, и привести один конкретный пример использования.

範例: Yes, I use my laptop every day because it’s portable and boots up quickly. For example, I often write reports and search for sources on it, which makes editing and researching much faster.

建議: Уберите запинки ("uh"), исправьте порядок слов и формы ("bought a computer", "it improved"), и стройте ответ: время + причина + конкретный пример. Можно добавить короткую связку для плавности.

範例: I learned to type in elementary school after my parents bought me a computer. I played online games with friends, so I practised typing a lot, which improved my speed.

建議: Сформулируйте ответ компактно, используйте связки и конкретизируйте методы улучшения (например, практику, тренировочные программы, игры). Это придаст содержательности и покажет разнообразие способов улучшения.

範例: I improve my typing mainly by practising while gaming, especially strategy games that require using many keys. I also sometimes use online typing exercises to work on accuracy and speed.

× It's really important for my studying and work because I need to decide tasks and it's convenient then writing by hand.

✓ It's really important for my studies and work because I need to decide tasks, and it's more convenient than writing by hand.

The sentence contains noun form and comparison issues. 'Studying' should be the noun 'studies' to refer to academic activities (article/word choice). 'Then' is incorrect in comparison context; use 'than'. Also add 'more' to compare convenience. Additionally, add a comma before the conjunction for clarity. Suggestion: use 'studies' and 'more convenient than'. Grammar problem type ID:9

× Yes, actually I use my laptop keyboard every single day for starting and walk because it's easier and faster to done my task and research.

✓ Yes, actually I use my laptop keyboard every single day for starting and work because it's easier and faster to do my tasks and research.

Multiple verb form errors: 'walk' is incorrect contextually; likely 'work'. 'Done' is past participle but here base form 'do' is needed after 'to' (infinitive). Also 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match 'my tasks and research'. Suggestion: use base verb after 'to' and correct word choice to 'work'. Grammar problem type ID:10

× Well, I think it's, uh, it was in elementary school when my parents bought computer for me.

✓ Well, I think it was in elementary school when my parents bought a computer for me.

Missing indefinite article 'a' before singular countable noun 'computer'. Also remove extraneous filler 'it's, uh,' and unnecessary repetition 'it was' should be used alone. Suggestion: use 'a computer' and simplify the clause. Grammar problem type ID:22

× I play computer games a lot and need for typing with my teammates and friends in this game and it's improve my skills and speed.

✓ I played computer games a lot and needed to type with my teammates and friends in those games, and it improved my skills and speed.

Tense consistency error: speaking about learning in past (elementary school), so verbs should be past tense: 'played', 'needed', 'improved'. Also 'need for typing' is incorrect; use 'needed to type'. 'This game' should be plural 'those games' if referring generally. Suggestion: keep past tense when describing past events and use correct verb patterns like 'need to do'. Grammar problem type ID:5

× As I said, I play computer game a lot and I need typing in game with my teammates and friends and in addition I like to play strategy games which need all parts of keyboard for playing.

✓ As I said, I play computer games a lot and I need to type in the game with my teammates and friends. In addition, I like to play strategy games that require using all parts of the keyboard.

Multiple preposition and verb form issues: 'play computer game a lot' should be 'play computer games a lot' (plural). 'Need typing in game' should be 'need to type in the game'. 'Which need all parts of keyboard for playing' is awkward; use 'that require using all parts of the keyboard'. Also add 'the' before 'keyboard'. Suggestion: use 'need to + verb', correct pluralization, and 'require' with 'using'. Grammar problem type ID:11