打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be concise and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific reason with a short example. Fix grammar (use infinitives correctly, plural/singular, articles) and avoid repetition.

範例: I prefer handwriting. It helps me remember spelling better and improves my writing skills; for example, when I copy new vocabulary by hand I retain the words longer than when I type them.

建議: Give a direct answer (desktop or laptop), then one clear reason with a specific daily activity. Use proper sentence structure and linking words like "because" or "for example." Avoid unclear phrases like "hub" and vague claims.

範例: Yes, I type on a laptop every day because I use it for schoolwork and emailing. For example, I write assignments and take notes on my laptop each evening.

建議: Answer with a clear time reference (e.g., "when I was X" or "two years ago") followed by one or two specific contexts where you practiced. Use past tense for completed learning and avoid repeating words.

範例: I learned to type about two years ago when I joined an ICT club at school. Since then I have practiced by typing assignments and searching for information online.

建議: Give a direct method (e.g., practice, apps, games), then a specific example and result. Use correct verb forms and reduce repetition.

範例: I improve my typing by practicing with online typing games and lessons. For example, I use a website that drills letter accuracy and speed, which helped me reduce errors and type faster.

× I prefer handwriting because handwriting can help me to memorize spelling word and help me is to improve writing skill.

✓ I prefer handwriting because it helps me memorize spelling and improve my writing skills.

Errors: unnecessary repetition, incorrect use of infinitive 'to memorize' after 'help' (both 'help + verb' and 'help + to verb' are possible but keep consistent), singular 'spelling word' should be 'spelling' or 'words', 'help me is to improve' is ungrammatical, and 'writing skill' should be plural 'writing skills'. Suggestion: simplify the sentence, use 'it' to refer to handwriting, use 'helps me memorize' and use plural 'skills'.

× Yet I'm typing on keyboard everything and I do assignment.

✓ I type on the keyboard all the time and I do assignments.

Errors: 'Yet' is misused at sentence start; present continuous 'I'm typing' with 'everything' is awkward for habitual action — use simple present 'I type'. Missing article 'the' before 'keyboard'. 'I do assignment' needs plural 'assignments'. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual actions, include articles, and pluralize countable nouns.

× I'm typing assignment on that hub and typing in my daily routine in because typing is how add to improve our many skills.

✓ I type assignments on that hub as part of my daily routine because typing helps me improve many skills.

Errors: 'typing assignment' should be 'type assignments' or 'typing assignments'; 'on that hub' may be okay but keep 'on that hub'; 'typing in my daily routine in' has extra 'in' and wrong structure — use 'as part of my daily routine'. 'typing is how add to improve our many skills' is ungrammatical; use 'typing helps me improve many skills.' Suggestion: use clear clause 'as part of my daily routine' and use 'helps me improve' to express result.

× I'm learning typing when I'm attend ICP club at and I'm typing when I have assignment and and when I want to know something when I search information in in on Internet and typing.

✓ I learned typing when I attended the ICP club, and I type when I have assignments or when I search for information on the Internet.

Errors: mixing tenses and incorrect verb forms: 'I'm learning typing when I'm attend' should be past 'I learned' and 'attended' because learning happened in the past. Extra words 'at' and duplicate 'and and' and 'in in' are errors. Use 'type when I have assignments' (simple present habit) and 'search for information on the Internet' (correct preposition 'on' and verb 'search for'). Suggestion: use past tense for past events, simple present for habitual actions, remove duplicates and extra prepositions.

× I'm improved typing skills with a playing playing game name like typing in a typing letter work ABC.

✓ I improved my typing skills by playing a game called Typing Tutor that practices typing letters (ABC).

Errors: 'I'm improved' is incorrect — use 'I improved' or 'I've improved'. 'with a playing playing game name like' is ungrammatical and repetitive. Use 'by playing a game called...' 'typing in a typing letter work ABC' is unclear; clarify as 'that practices typing letters (ABC)'. Suggestion: choose correct tense ('I improved' for past improvement), avoid repetition, use 'by + -ing' to indicate means, and give a clear name or description for the game.