打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 응답은 명확하지만 반복과 장황함이 보입니다. 문장수를 2~3문장으로 줄이고 반복(예: "why why")을 제거하세요. 또한 이유를 더 구체적으로 제시하고 연결어(for example, because)를 사용해 문장 구조를 자연스럽게 만드세요. 예를 들어 기억력이 좋아진다는 주장을 구체적인 예(노트 필기, 복습 습관)로 뒷받침하면 설득력이 높아집니다.

範例: I prefer handwriting because my notes are clearer and easier to review. For example, when I write by hand I tend to summarize key points, which helps me remember them better during exams.

建議: 답변이 긍정적이지만 음향적 채우기(umm, uh)와 어색한 어순이 많습니다. 더 간결하게 말하고 구체적인 활동을 덧붙이세요(예: 업무 이메일, 과제 제출). 또한 연결어(so, because)를 적절히 사용해 논리를 명확히 하세요.

範例: Yes, I use a desktop or laptop every day because I need them for messaging and work. For instance, I use Kakaotalk to chat with friends and my laptop to reply to emails and submit assignments.

建議: 내용은 괜찮지만 문법과 어휘 사용에서 실수가 있습니다(예: 'learned how to type on keyboard' → 'learned to type on a keyboard', 시제일치). 게임을 통해 향상된 과정을 더 명확히 설명하고 연결어(after, so)로 흐름을 정리하세요.

範例: I learned to type on a keyboard when I was ten. At first I wasn't very fast, but after playing online games where I had to chat quickly, my typing speed improved significantly.

建議: 반복과 어법 오류가 눈에 띕니다. 문장을 간결하게 만들고 구체적인 방법(연습 시간, 타수 연습, 온라인 타자 연습 사이트 등)을 제시하세요. 또한 시제와 수일치에 주의하고 연결어(while, so, therefore)를 사용해 논리를 명확히 하세요.

範例: I improved my typing mainly by playing online games that required quick chat. Because I practiced typing frequently during games, my speed increased; I also tried typing exercises online to become more accurate.

× Usually I prefer handwriting because it is more legible than typing and also while handwriting I can remember it in a very efficient way, that's why why I like it.

✓ Usually I prefer handwriting because it is more legible than typing and, when I handwrite, I can remember things very efficiently; that's why I like it.

Student used 'while handwriting' which is awkward and incorrect pronoun/verb form; 'handwrite' or 'when I handwrite' is correct. Also 'remember it' is vague; use 'remember things'. Remove duplicate 'why'. Improve punctuation for clarity. (Grammar problem type ID: 12)

× Yes, definitely I do because umm, when I send some message to someone, I have to use my desktop or laptop, uh, to using uh, messenger application such as Kakaotalk or Telegram. So it's necessary for every day.

✓ Yes, definitely I do, because when I send a message to someone, I have to use my desktop or laptop to use messenger applications such as Kakaotalk or Telegram. So it's necessary every day.

The phrase 'to using' is incorrect; after 'have to' the base verb should be used ('have to use'). Also 'some message' should be 'a message', and 'messenger application' should be plural 'messenger applications' to match examples. 'For every day' should be 'every day'. (Grammar problem type ID: 4)

× I learned how to type on keyboard when I was 10 years old. At the beginning of the learning, I wasn't really good at it, but uh, after I played the game to and I had to communicate with others very rapidly, it's improved.

✓ I learned how to type on the keyboard when I was 10 years old. At the beginning, I wasn't really good at it, but after I played games and had to communicate with others very rapidly, it improved.

Use definite article 'the keyboard'. 'At the beginning of the learning' is unnatural; use 'At the beginning'. 'after I played the game to' is ungrammatical; use 'after I played games'. Tense consistency: 'it's improved' should be past 'it improved' because referring to past change. (Grammar problem type ID: 5)

× I learned how to type on keyboard when I was 10 years old.

✓ I learned how to type on the keyboard when I was 10 years old.

English typically requires the definite article 'the' with 'keyboard' when referring to the act of typing on a keyboard in general. Omitting 'the' is incorrect in this context. (Grammar problem type ID: 17)

× The best way of improve my typing was playing game.

✓ The best way to improve my typing was playing games.

After 'the best way' we need 'to' + base verb ('to improve'), not 'of improve'. 'playing game' should be plural 'playing games' for natural English. (Grammar problem type ID: 8)

× While I was playing game, I had to communicate with each other very rapidly.

✓ While I was playing games, I had to communicate with others very rapidly.

'playing game' should be 'playing games'. 'communicate with each other' is used reflexively between two parties; with a group use 'communicate with others'. (Grammar problem type ID: 12)

× In this circumstance it was very easy to remember and make it faster and faster was easy.

✓ In that situation it was very easy to remember things, and my typing became faster and faster.

Original sentence is ungrammatical and repetitive. 'In this circumstance' awkward; 'in that situation' or 'in that circumstance' is better. 'make it faster and faster was easy' is incorrect structure. Use clear clauses: 'my typing became faster and faster.' (Grammar problem type ID: 26)