打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be concise, correct grammar, and give a clear reason with one specific example. Avoid filler words and repetition. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words (e.g., 'because' or 'for example').

範例: I prefer handwriting because it feels more personal and helps me remember ideas better. For example, when I take lecture notes by hand, I retain more information than when I type them.

建議: Give a clear, grammatically correct answer and expand slightly with a concrete detail about what you do on the laptop. Use one linking phrase (e.g., 'because' or 'for example') and avoid fillers.

範例: Yes, I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I use it for studying and writing essays. For example, I spend time each afternoon typing notes, researching online, and completing assignments.

建議: Provide a clear time reference and correct tense and word choice. State the time first, then add a brief explanation or context with linking words. Remove hesitations and repetitions.

範例: I learned to type when I started senior high school. At that time, I had to type assignments for class, so I practiced regularly and improved quickly.

建議: Answer directly with a topic sentence, then give specific details about your method and progress. Combine short fragments into full sentences and use linking words such as 'so' or 'for example' to show purpose or results.

範例: I improve my typing by practicing every day for about 30 minutes. For example, I use online typing exercises and timed tests so I can increase my speed and reduce errors.

× I prefer to handwriting.

✓ I prefer handwriting.

The verb 'prefer' can be followed by a gerund (handwriting) or by 'to' + infinitive (to write). 'To handwriting' is incorrect because 'handwriting' is a noun/gerund form and does not combine with 'to' here. Use 'I prefer handwriting' or 'I prefer to write by hand.' Suggestion: Use 'prefer' + gerund (prefer handwriting) or 'prefer to' + base verb (prefer to write by hand).

× I think writing by hand is is so meaningful and it's a way to.

✓ I think writing by hand is so meaningful and it's a way to connect with people.

The sentence has a duplicated 'is is' (typo) and an incomplete phrase 'a way to' which needs an infinitive or object to complete the idea. Also 'connect with people' completes the sense. Suggestion: Remove duplicate words and complete the infinitive phrase (a way to connect).

× It's way too, uh, COM contact with.

✓ It's a way to feel more connected.

The original fragment is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Way too' usually modifies an adjective (e.g., 'way too expensive') and 'COM contact with' appears to be garbled. Rewriting to 'It's a way to feel more connected' produces a clear, grammatical idea that fits the context. Suggestion: Use complete clauses and avoid filler words; express the intended meaning with a subject and verb. Note: This correction addresses sentence clarity and structure rather than a single listed grammatical category.

× Yes, yes, I type on laptop keyboard every day because I use it for study.

✓ Yes, yes, I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I use it for studying.

The original lacks the article 'a' before 'laptop keyboard' (article error) and the phrase 'for study' is unnatural in this context; use the gerund 'studying' after 'for.' Suggestion: Include appropriate articles and use gerunds for activities after prepositions (for studying).

× I think when I enter the Senior High School and at the time I have to fall and and learn to typing on the keyboard.

✓ I think it was when I entered senior high school; at that time I had to learn to type on the keyboard.

Several tense and form errors: 'enter' should be past 'entered' to match 'when I' referring to a past event; 'have to fall' is incorrect and likely a mis-saying—removed in correction; 'learn to typing' is wrong because 'learn to' should be followed by the base verb 'type,' not the gerund 'typing.' Also 'Senior High School' doesn't need capitalization as a general noun. Suggestion: Use past tense for past events and 'learn to' + base verb structure. Note: The phrase 'have to fall' was omitted because it seems unintended; if the student meant 'had to move' or 'had to start,' replace with the correct verb.

× Oh, I practice practice typing every day. I often spend 30 minutes. Focus on typing.

✓ Oh, I practice typing every day. I often spend 30 minutes focusing on typing.

Reduce repetition 'practice practice' to a single 'practice.' After 'spend' use a gerund ('spend 30 minutes focusing') not a sentence fragment 'Focus on typing.' Suggestion: Use 'practice' + gerund and 'spend' + gerund to create complete grammatical sentences.