打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be clear and grammatical: start with a direct topic sentence, avoid extra or incorrect words, and give one or two specific supporting reasons with linking words. Aim for 2–4 short sentences, using correct verbs and articles.

範例: I prefer handwriting to typing. I find handwriting convenient and relaxing, and I especially enjoy writing stories and poems by hand because it helps me focus and feel calm.

建議: Give a clear direct answer and avoid unclear or irrelevant words. State which device you use and one clear reason. Use linking words like 'because' correctly and keep sentences concise and natural.

範例: I usually type on a laptop keyboard because it is portable and comfortable. For example, I can work anywhere at home or in a café, so I prefer my laptop.

建議: Begin with a clear time phrase and explain briefly how you learned, using correct grammar and linking words. Remove confusing phrases and be specific about who helped and what method you used.

範例: I learned to type when I was a child. My father showed me how to use his computer, and at first I felt uncomfortable and made many mistakes, but after practising every day I became much better.

建議: Answer directly and give one or two specific practice methods with clear linking words. Use correct collocations (e.g. 'practice every day', 'typing speed') and avoid unclear phrases like 'picture can make up me'.

範例: I improve my typing by practising every day and using online typing exercises to increase my speed. For example, I use typing tests and practice lessons that focus on accuracy and speed.

× Most of the time episode handwriting because it's very convenient and I like writing something like stories and poems by handwriting, which fills me very light and relaxed.

✓ Most of the time I choose handwriting because it's very convenient and I like writing things like stories and poems by hand, which makes me feel light and relaxed.

The sentence has multiple issues: missing subject 'I' and incorrect word 'episode' (likely unnecessary), incorrect phrase 'by handwriting' (use 'by hand' or 'handwriting' as a noun), incorrect verb 'fills me very light' (use 'makes me feel light'). This maps to incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs and sentence structure. Suggestion: include subject, remove irrelevant word, use 'hand' for the method of writing, and use 'makes me feel' for emotional state. Grammar problem type ID:13

× Usually I type on a laptop keyboard because. I really like to type on Keeper of Electrode because it is very comfortable and helpful for my joker.

✓ Usually I type on a laptop keyboard because it is portable and comfortable. I really like typing on it because it suits my needs.

Original has a sentence fragment 'because.' and nonsense phrase 'Keeper of Electrode' and 'my joker' which appear incorrect. This is primarily sentence structure and word choice issues. Fix by combining fragments and using clear referents ('it' for the laptop). Ensure each clause is complete and meaningful. Grammar problem type ID:26

× In my childhood, my father-in-law computer, at that time I started learning to type on a record. At the first time I don't feel very comfortable with people and I don't know how to use it. But after daily use I learned it.

✓ In my childhood, my father-in-law had a computer, and at that time I started learning to type. At first I didn't feel very comfortable and I didn't know how to use it, but after daily practice I learned.

Multiple errors: missing verbs ('had'), awkward 'on a record', incorrect tense and negative forms ('don't' should be 'didn't' for past), and awkward phrasing. This is sentence structure and past tense issues. Suggestions: use past tense consistently for past events, combine clauses with conjunctions, and use 'practice' instead of 'use' for learning a skill. Grammar problem type ID:26

× At the first time I don't feel very comfortable with people and I don't know how to use it.

✓ At first I didn't feel very comfortable around it and I didn't know how to use it.

The sentence refers to past experience, so present tense 'don't' is incorrect; use past simple 'didn't'. Also 'with people' is unclear; 'around it' (the computer) is clearer. Suggestion: use past tense for past events and choose prepositions that match the meaning. Grammar problem type ID:5

× I improve my typing by practicing everyday. Picture can make up me do much better and typing faster and it helps me to improve my skill.

✓ I improve my typing by practicing every day. Practice helps me do much better and type faster, and it helps me improve my skills.

Errors: 'everyday' (adjective) should be 'every day' (adverbial phrase) when meaning each day; 'Picture can make up me do' is nonsensical—likely meant 'Practice helps me to do' or 'Practice makes me do'. Also 'typing faster' should align with verb forms: 'type faster'. Use plural 'skills' for general ability. Suggestions: use 'every day' for frequency, use 'practice/practicing' correctly, and match verb forms. Grammar problem type ID:13