打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cải thiện: Câu trả lời đã rõ ràng và tự nhiên nhưng có thể cụ thể hơn bằng cách thêm ví dụ cá nhân hoặc so sánh ngắn giữa hai hình thức. Tránh lặp ý ("personal character" và "emotionally connected" tương tự nhau) và giữ độ dài dưới 5 câu. Nên dùng một liên từ để nối ý mạch lạc (ví dụ: "because", "so", "for example").

範例: I prefer handwriting because it feels more personal and expressive. For example, my grandmother’s handwritten cards always make me feel closer to her. Compared with typed text, handwriting often shows the writer’s personality and is more memorable.

建議: Cải thiện: Có lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ và diễn đạt chưa tự nhiên ("work at a office worker"). Nên mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp, sửa ngữ pháp và rút gọn ý để tránh dư thừa. Thêm một chi tiết cụ thể về công việc sẽ làm câu có trọng lượng hơn.

範例: I type on a desktop every day because I work in an office as an administrative assistant. I send emails and use office software daily, so the desktop lets me work faster and more reliably.

建議: Cải thiện: Nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và câu không mạch lạc ("learnt are", "record practice"). Cần trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng (khi nào), rồi nêu chi tiết cụ thể về quá trình học và phương pháp luyện tập. Sử dụng thì phù hợp và cấu trúc đơn giản, tránh lỗi từ vựng và lặp từ ("the the").

範例: I learned to type in high school during a computing class when I was about 15. At first I found it hard to remember the correct finger positions, but I practised regularly with typing exercises and improved quickly.

建議: Cải thiện: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ("record and review the timeline of the object", "challenge it by write"). Nên nêu phương pháp cụ thể (ví dụ: phần mềm gõ, luyện tập tốc độ, bài tập accuracy), dùng liên từ để nối ý, và giữ tối đa 3-4 câu. Trình bày theo cấu trúc: chủ đề + phương pháp + ví dụ cụ thể + kết quả nếu có.

範例: I improve my typing by practising regularly with online typing programs that track speed and accuracy. I also do timed drills to increase my speed and sometimes challenge myself by trying to type short stories quickly to build fluency.

× I prefer handwriting because it has a more personal character.

✓ I prefer handwriting because it has a more personal quality.

The original sentence is grammatically acceptable but 'personal character' is an odd collocation in this context. 'Personal quality' is a more natural collocation to describe handwriting. Suggestion: choose words that commonly go together (collocations).

× I type on the desktop every day because I work at a office worker.

✓ I type on the desktop every day because I work as an office worker.

The phrase 'work at a office worker' is incorrect. Use the preposition 'as' to indicate role or job: 'work as an office worker'. Also use the article 'an' before a noun beginning with a vowel sound. Suggestion: use 'work as' + job title and correct article ('a'/'an').

× I learnt are in high school, I still remember the first lesson is very difficult to me because it's hard to remember the the finger position.

✓ I learned in high school; I still remember the first lesson was very difficult for me because it was hard to remember the finger positions.

Multiple issues: use of 'learnt are' is incorrect—use simple past 'learned' or 'learnt' alone. Run-on sentence needs separation (use semicolon or period). Tense consistency: when recalling past events use past tense ('was', 'was hard'). Preposition 'to me' should be 'for me'. 'the the finger position' has a duplicate 'the' and 'position' should be plural 'positions' when referring to multiple fingers. Suggestion: use simple past consistently, correct prepositions, fix duplicated words and number agreement.

× But I record practice so I improve quickly.

✓ But I practiced regularly, so I improved quickly.

The original mixes present and past without clarity. If referring to past learning, use past tense: 'practiced' and 'improved'. 'Record practice' is unnatural; use 'practiced regularly' or 'kept a record of my practice' depending on intended meaning. Suggestion: keep tense consistent and choose natural verbs ('practice' -> 'practiced').

× I regularly practice typing and I usually record and review the timeline of the object and in free time I also try to challenge it by write a novel quickly.

✓ I regularly practice typing, and I usually record and review my progress; in my free time I also try to challenge myself by writing a novel quickly.

Several grammar problems: 'record and review the timeline of the object' is unclear—use 'record and review my progress'. 'In free time' should be 'in my free time'. 'Try to challenge it' should be 'try to challenge myself'. After 'by' use the gerund form 'writing', not the base verb 'write'. Suggestion: use clear nouns ('progress'), correct reflexive pronoun ('myself'), and use gerund after 'by'.