打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be direct and concise: state preference clearly, give one or two specific reasons with linking words, correct grammar (prefer X to Y, activity vs activities), and avoid hesitation sounds. Keep to 2–4 sentences.

範例: I prefer handwriting to typing because I enjoy the physical act of writing and my handwriting looks neat. Also, writing by hand helps me remember information better, so I often take notes with a pen rather than on a computer.

建議: Answer the question directly (desktop or laptop or both), then add a brief reason with linking word (because, so). Fix grammar (I prefer handwriting to typing). Avoid unclear phrases and number errors. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

範例: I usually type on a laptop every day because it is portable and convenient. I make sure my workspace is comfortable and well lit so I can work for long periods without fatigue.

建議: Start with a clear time expression (e.g., ‘I learned when…’), then add a short comment about current ability and future plan using correct grammar. Replace fillers and apologetic phrases with confident statements.

範例: I learned to type when I was in primary school. However, I still type quite slowly, so I plan to take a typing course soon to improve my speed.

建議: Give a direct, complete answer: state specific actions you will take or are taking (online lessons, practice software, daily timed practice). Use linking words (because, so) and avoid unclear idioms. Keep 2–3 sentences and check grammar (I plan to attend a class).

範例: To improve my typing, I plan to attend a typing course and practice with online typing programs for 20 minutes each day. I believe improving my speed and accuracy will help me in many jobs because computer skills are essential today.

× I think I prefer handwriting than diving, uh, because especially if you have a, a beautiful handwriting and you can enjoy doing this and it's a good activities, then just type in it's on, uh, computer. Uh, so it's, it's a beautiful.

✓ I think I prefer handwriting to typing, especially if you have beautiful handwriting and you can enjoy doing it; it's a good activity compared to typing on a computer.

The main preposition for expressing preference is 'prefer ... to ...' not 'prefer ... than' (Grammar Problem Type ID 11). Also 'diving' is likely a miswording for 'typing' so corrected to 'typing'. 'A beautiful handwriting' is incorrect because 'handwriting' is uncountable here, so use 'beautiful handwriting' (Article/quantity issue relates to type 22 but primary was preposition). 'Doing this' is more naturally 'doing it'. 'It's a good activities' mixes singular/plural; change to 'a good activity'. 'Type in it's on, computer' has word order issues corrected to 'typing on a computer'. Suggestions: use 'prefer X to Y', treat 'handwriting' as uncountable, ensure singular/plural agreement for 'activity', and place prepositions correctly (e.g., 'typing on a computer').

× This stuff definitely, and as I mentioned before, I prefer a handwrite then to, uh, keep it typing. So I just make sure the place or desktop is, uh, comfortable and there is enough light and I have everything to 1 I want, so I just start doing it.

✓ Yes, definitely. As I mentioned before, I prefer handwriting to typing. So I just make sure the place or desktop is comfortable, there is enough light, and I have everything I want before I start.

The original has subject-verb and noun form problems (Grammar Problem Type ID 27). 'I prefer a handwrite then to, uh, keep it typing' is incorrect: 'handwrite' is a verb; use the noun 'handwriting' and use 'prefer ... to ...' for comparison. 'There is enough light and I have everything to 1 I want' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'there is enough light, and I have everything I want before I start.' Suggestions: use correct noun forms ('handwriting' not 'handwrite'), maintain subject-verb agreement and parallel structure in lists, and place clauses in logical order ('before I start').

× When I was in school but I'm so sorry I'm so slowly typing on keyboard so I'm in intending to go to complex so for, uh, learning how to do this well.

✓ When I was in school I learned some typing, but I'm sorry I type very slowly on the keyboard, so I intend to join a course to learn how to type well.

The original mixes tenses and uses incorrect forms (Grammar Problem Type ID 5). 'When I was in school' sets a past time, so 'I learned some typing' fits. 'I'm so slowly typing' is incorrect adverb placement and form; use 'I type very slowly'. 'I'm in intending to go to complex' is incorrect; use 'I intend to join a course' or 'I am intending to take a course' for future intention. 'Learning how to do this well' should be 'to learn how to type well'. Suggestions: match verb tense to time expressions, use proper adverb placement ('type slowly' or 'type very slowly'), and use correct collocations ('join a course', 'take a course').

× As I mentioned before, I didn't remove my typing Z, but I'm uh, attending or intending to attend a class for this. So because you know, computer skills is very important for job or for everything these days. So shall I do this?

✓ As I mentioned before, I have not improved my typing yet, but I am attending or intend to attend a class for this because computer skills are very important for jobs these days. Should I do this?

This sentence shows modal and auxiliary verb issues (Grammar Problem Type ID 4). 'I didn't remove my typing Z' is unclear and ungrammatical; likely meant 'I have not improved my typing yet'. Use present perfect for actions affecting the present. 'I'm uh, attending or intending to attend' — both forms okay; clarified to 'I am attending or intend to attend'. 'Computer skills is' is subject-verb agreement error; should be 'computer skills are' (also relates to ID 27). 'For job or for everything' corrected to 'for jobs' or 'for many jobs'. 'So shall I do this?' is odd in context; 'Should I do this?' matches modal question form. Suggestions: use present perfect for incomplete actions, correct subject-verb agreement for plural nouns, and use 'should' for seeking advice.