视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and grammatically accurate. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms and noun agreement, and give one or two brief supporting reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases.

範例: I don’t usually like taking pictures of views because I think they waste storage space. Instead, I prefer taking photos with my family, as those photos are more meaningful and memorable to me.

建議: Give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons and examples. Use linking words (for example, because, while) and correct vocabulary (e.g., scenery vs sights). Keep it to 2–4 sentences and avoid contradictory or unclear statements.

範例: I prefer urban views because cities offer a variety of sights and activities. For example, I enjoy watching street life, modern architecture and busy markets, which I find more interesting than the quiet fields and trees in rural areas.

建議: Answer directly and use correct grammar and clearer phrasing. Provide a specific reason and an example. Use linking words (because, for instance) and avoid unnecessary phrases like "I need to take myself."

範例: I would prefer views in other countries because I’ve lived in my country all my life and want to experience different landscapes and cultures. For instance, I often see beautiful coastal scenery on social media and would love to see it in person.

× I personally don't like taking picture because I think it waste of memory.

✓ I personally don't like taking pictures because I think it wastes memory.

The noun 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' (singular/plural) when speaking generally; this falls under plural issue but key error is verb agreement: 'it waste' is incorrect. Use 'wastes' because the subject 'it' (referring to taking pictures) requires third person singular verb. Also omit 'of' after 'wastes' and drop the article to sound natural: 'wastes memory.' Suggestion: use 'taking pictures' and 'it wastes memory.'

× I'd rather taking picture with me and my family which shut our faces and not just a few I don't really interesting on it.

✓ I'd rather take pictures with my family, where we make faces, not just a few; I'm not really interested in those.

'Rather' is followed by the base verb 'take' not the -ing form. 'Picture' should be plural 'pictures' for general meaning. Use 'my family' not 'me and my family' (subject/object issue). 'Which shut our faces' is unnatural; use 'where we make faces.' 'I don't really interesting on it' is wrong: use the adjective 'interested' with preposition 'in' and match number: 'interested in those' refers to pictures. This corrects verb form, pronoun use, adjective form, and preposition usage.

× There are a lot of scenery that I can see rather than the rural areas because it's absolutely boring for me.

✓ There is a lot of scenery that I can see, compared to rural areas, which are absolutely boring to me.

'Scenery' is an uncountable noun and takes singular verb 'is' not 'are'. Also use 'compared to' or 'rather than' correctly; 'rural areas' is plural so refer with 'which are.' Use 'boring to me' rather than 'for me' for natural phrasing. This addresses noun-verb agreement and comparative phrasing.

× I just can't get trees and also grass I consider myself.

✓ I just can't appreciate trees and grass; I don't consider myself a nature person.

Original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Get' is informal; use 'appreciate.' 'I consider myself' lacks an object—complete it as 'I don't consider myself a nature person' or 'not into nature.' This fixes sentence structure and clarity.

× I personally haven't been into other countries but I would like to say other countries because I have been spending my whole life in my country so I need to take myself enjoying scenery in the other countries like what I always seen through social media.

✓ I personally haven't been to other countries, but I would prefer other countries because I have spent my whole life in my country, so I want to enjoy the scenery in other countries like what I have always seen on social media.

Use 'been to' not 'been into.' 'Prefer' is more natural than 'would like to say.' Use present perfect 'have spent' (not 'have been spending' for completed long-term action). 'Need to take myself enjoying' is incorrect—use 'want to enjoy the scenery.' 'Seen through social media' should be 'seen on social media.' This addresses preposition use, verb tense (present perfect), and verb forms.