视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and use clearer tenses. Start with a direct topic sentence, avoid filler sounds (um, uh), correct tense consistency, and give one specific example with a linking phrase. Keep it to 2–4 sentences.

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I have loved photography since childhood, so I often photograph scenic landscapes and candid family moments. For example, last summer I spent an afternoon capturing the sunset over a lake, which produced several memorable shots.

建議: Answer directly, remove repetition and filler words, and use linking words to contrast reasons. Use specific descriptive vocabulary (e.g., rolling hills, farmland, skyscrapers) and limit to 2–3 sentences.

範例: I prefer views in rural areas because they feature rolling hills and wide farmland, which I find calming. In contrast, urban views are dominated by skyscrapers and busy streets, so they feel less peaceful.

建議: Begin with a clear topic sentence, use correct grammar (subject-verb agreement), avoid repetition, and give a specific reason or example. Mention a concrete feature or place to make your answer more vivid.

範例: I prefer views in my own country because the climate is mild and the landscapes are very diverse. For instance, our northern hills have lush greenery and scenic viewpoints that I visit often to take photographs.

× 'I have been a very photogenic person since I was a child and I had been doing photography uh since then.'

✓ 'I have been very photogenic since I was a child and I have been doing photography since then.'

'Singular and plural issue' applies here because wording 'a very photogenic person' is not strictly wrong, but redundancy and tense mismatch cause clarity problems; however the main corrections follow tense consistency rather than number. Use present perfect continuous "have been doing" (not past perfect "had been doing") to show an action that started in the past and continues to the present, and remove the unnecessary article "a" before "very photogenic" for more natural phrasing. Suggestion: use consistent present perfect/perfect continuous for ongoing states and activities.'

× 'I enjoyed taking photos of scenic landscapes, candid family moments.'

✓ 'I enjoy taking photos of scenic landscapes and candid family moments.'

'Past tense issue' applies because the question asks about likes/habits in general; using past tense "enjoyed" incorrectly implies a finished action. Replace with present simple "enjoy" to indicate habitual preference. Also add 'and' to connect the list of items and maintain parallel structure.'

× 'If I talk about my personal views, I prefer rural areas as because they are covered with green green xintree like farms and fields uh and whereas urban areas are more like covered with buildings and all.'

✓ 'If I talk about my personal preference, I prefer rural areas because they are covered with green trees, farms, and fields, whereas urban areas are mostly covered with buildings.'

'Incorrect use of prepositions' fits because 'as because' is a redundant and incorrect combination; use just 'because'. Also 'covered with green green xintree like' has misused prepositions and word forms; replace with 'covered with green trees, farms, and fields'. Remove filler words and correct 'whereas' placement for contrast.'

× 'The I prefer view in my country more than others as my country have a very good weather conditions with the beautiful landscapes and green scenic, uh, scenic view around.'

✓ 'I prefer views in my country more than in others because my country has very good weather, beautiful landscapes, and green scenery.'

'Singular and plural issue' applies because 'view' should be plural 'views' when speaking generally, and 'conditions' paired with 'a very good' is inconsistent; also subject-verb agreement ('my country have' is incorrect) overlaps with subject-verb agreement rules but per instructions we only correct types listed. The correction also fixes article usage and word order: use 'has' for singular subject, remove redundant words, and use 'scenery' as an uncountable noun.'