视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give two specific examples with brief explanations. Use linking words (for example, and) and avoid repetition. Also correct verb forms and articles (e.g., 'take pictures', 'I want', 'makes me want').

範例: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views because I want to remember beautiful scenes. For example, I often photograph the turquoise sea and sunny beaches to capture their colours, and I also take pictures of tall mountains and unique farmland to show different landscapes. These photos help me recall trips and share stories with friends.

建議: Organise your answer: give a clear preference sentence, then two supporting reasons with linking words (because, for example). Avoid fillers (umm) and correct grammar (e.g., 'what people are doing', 'crowded and bustling areas', 'skyscrapers'). Keep within 3–4 sentences.

範例: I prefer urban views because cities offer lively scenes and architectural variety. For example, I like photographing people in crowded markets to capture everyday stories, and I also enjoy taking shots of skyscrapers because they reflect the effort behind urban development.

建議: State your preference clearly, then give two specific reasons and concise examples. Correct grammar (e.g., 'other countries', 'my own country', 'different styles of agriculture'). Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' to make your answer coherent.

範例: I prefer views in other countries because they show unfamiliar scenes and cultural differences. For example, I enjoy photographing distinctive farming styles abroad and unique street scenes that contrast with what I usually see at home, which makes my photos more interesting.

× Yes, I really like to take picture for different views because I really want to remember all the beautiful things I can see, for example for the turquoise blue sea, the sunny beaches or the really tall mountain or some different kind of agriculture.

✓ Yes, I really like taking pictures of different views because I want to remember all the beautiful things I see, for example the turquoise blue sea, the sunny beaches, the really tall mountains, or different kinds of agriculture.

The verb pattern 'like to take' is acceptable but the more natural continuous preference is 'like taking' (Grammar Problem Type ID 8). 'Take picture' needs plural: 'take pictures' (ID 1). Use 'of' not 'for' when describing what the pictures depict (ID 11). 'I really want' is wordy; 'I want' is sufficient (style). Use simple present 'I see' rather than 'I can see' for general statements (ID 6). 'Mountain' should be plural when listing types (ID 1). 'Different kind of agriculture' should be 'different kinds of agriculture' (ID 14).

× So all that will make me really wants to record with my camera.

✓ So all that will make me really want to record with my camera.

After 'will make' the verb is in bare infinitive form, so use 'want' not 'wants' (Grammar Problem Type ID 27). 'Me ... wants' is incorrect because 'wants' agrees with third person singular, not with the object 'me'.

× I would prefer the views of the city areas because home I would like to record on what did the people is doing.

✓ I would prefer views of city areas because at home I like to record what people are doing.

The original has incorrect word order and tense (Grammar Problem Type ID 26). 'Home' needs 'at home' (ID 11). 'Record on' is incorrect; use 'record' or 'record what' (ID 11). 'What did the people is doing' mixes past question form and present continuous; use 'what people are doing' (present continuous for ongoing actions) (ID 6).

× I think I can always find out some interesting story around the people with the crowded and bustling area.

✓ I think I can always find some interesting stories among people in crowded, bustling areas.

'Find out some interesting story' is unnatural; use 'find some interesting stories' (ID 13). 'Around the people' should be 'among people' (ID 11). 'The crowded and bustling area' should be plural or non-specific 'crowded, bustling areas' (ID 1 and ID 11).

× I would I also like to umm skyscrapers or the cities.

✓ I would also like skyscrapers and city scenes.

Extra 'I' is redundant and incorrect (ID 12). 'Like to umm skyscrapers' is ungrammatical; use 'like skyscrapers' or 'like photographing skyscrapers' (ID 8). 'The cities' is vague; 'city scenes' is clearer (style).

× I think that is the result of the people who try hard to building it, so I like to.

✓ I think those are the result of people who worked hard to build them, so I like them.

Pronoun and verb forms are wrong (ID 12). 'That is' should agree with plural 'those are' (ID 1/27). 'Try hard to building' should be 'worked hard to build' (use past or perfect; here past 'worked' and bare infinitive 'build') (ID 5 and ID 9). 'I like to' is incomplete; 'I like them' or 'I like that' is needed (sentence structure).

× I would prefer the one in the other countries because you know in my own countries I can use so easily to keep saying it.

✓ I would prefer those in other countries because, you know, in my own country I can easily keep saying them.

'The one in the other countries' mixes singular and plural; use plural 'those in other countries' or singular 'one in another country' (Grammar Problem Type ID 1). 'My own countries' should be 'my own country' (ID 1). 'Keep saying it' is vague; if referring to scenes or views use 'keep seeing them' or 'keep saying them' depending on meaning (verb choice issue ID 11).

× But for the one in other countries such as different kind of style of the agricultures or different purpose stories which really make a difference with what I am used to it.

✓ But those in other countries have different agricultural styles or different cultural stories, which really differ from what I am used to.

'The one in other countries' conflicts number (ID 1). 'Different kind of style of the agricultures' should be 'different agricultural styles' (ID 13 and ID 14). 'Different purpose stories' is unclear; 'different cultural stories' or 'different kinds of stories' is better (word choice). 'Make a difference with what I am used to it' has extra 'it' and wrong preposition; use 'differ from what I am used to' (ID 11 and ID 12).

× So I really like the views of other country.

✓ So I really like the views of other countries.

'Other country' should be plural 'other countries' when speaking generally (Grammar Problem Type ID 1). 'The views of' is acceptable but more natural is 'views in other countries' (preposition choice ID 11).