视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be direct and clear. Start with a simple topic sentence (Yes/No + reason), then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid hesitations and incorrect word forms. Use linking words like “because” or “for example.” Keep it under five sentences.

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because photography helps me capture memorable moments. For example, I like photographing historical sites and landscapes when I travel because they show unique details and moods. Taking these photos also makes me feel positive and creative.

建議: Answer directly (I prefer rural/urban) and give clear, specific reasons with correct grammar. Use linking words like “because” and “for example.” Avoid vague phrases and incorrect plural/singular forms.

範例: I prefer views in rural areas because they offer natural scenes and everyday life that I can photograph. For example, I often photograph farmers working in fields and the changing seasons, which create interesting textures and colors in my photos.

建議: Give a clear preference and explain briefly. If you like both, say so and contrast them with linking words (however, also). Use correct possessive forms and concise language. Provide one specific reason or example for each preference.

範例: I like views in my own country because they are familiar and remind me of my childhood. However, I also enjoy photographing views in other countries because they offer new perspectives and different architecture, which inspires my creativity.

× Candle is speaking be a shutterbug.

✓ I am a shutterbug.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and auxiliary verbs and includes an unrelated word 'Candle'. Use the first-person pronoun 'I' and the verb 'am' for a simple present description: 'I am a shutterbug.' This matches the speaker describing themselves.

× I love to taking the pictures of different views because I am in a photographers.

✓ I love taking pictures of different views because I am a photographer.

The verb pattern 'love to taking' is incorrect; use either 'love to take' or 'love taking'. Also 'photographers' should be singular with the article 'a' to match the subject: 'a photographer.' Use 'pictures of different views' without 'the'.

× Let me the mood, uh, positive.

✓ They put me in a positive mood.

The original lacks a clear subject and verb sequence. A natural expression is 'They put me in a positive mood' (or 'It puts me in a positive mood') to explain what causes the mood. Ensure subject-verb-object order.

× And I was supposed the different, different places to, uh, visit the views for taking this, uh, for taking the pictures of, uh, historical places.

✓ I like visiting different places to take pictures of historical sites.

The phrase 'was supposed the different' is ungrammatical. Simplify to a present habitual preference: 'I like visiting different places to take pictures of historical sites.' Use 'take pictures of' rather than awkward repetition.

× To be honest, I visit rural areas because there are different views which I can capture in my cameras and moreover, I want to expose the different views.

✓ To be honest, I visit rural areas because there are different views I can capture with my camera, and I want to show these views.

'Capture in my cameras' is awkward: use 'capture with my camera' (singular) or 'in my camera' rarely used. 'Expose' is incorrect in this context; use 'show' or 'share'. Also reduce relative clause: 'views I can capture'.

× For example, the farmer are growing the weeds, I can also click the photos of.

✓ For example, the farmer is growing crops; I can also take photos of them.

Subject-verb agreement: singular 'farmer' requires 'is' not 'are'. 'Growing the weeds' is wrong in meaning — farmers usually grow crops. 'Click the photos of' is informal; use 'take photos of them.' Ensure pronoun 'them' refers to 'crops.'

× To be honest, I prefer views in I own countries and in another country also I want to explore because I am living in the childhood in my own country.

✓ To be honest, I prefer views in my own country, but I also want to explore other countries because I grew up in my own country.

Use possessive 'my own country' not 'I own countries.' 'In another country also I want to explore' should be 'I also want to explore other countries.' 'I am living in the childhood' is ungrammatical; use past tense 'I grew up' to express childhood background. Maintain consistent tense and correct pronouns.

× I want to see the another views on other country explores the new thinking and I want to also capture it in my camera for photograph.

✓ I want to see new views in other countries to broaden my perspective, and I also want to capture them with my camera.

'The another views' is incorrect; use 'new views' or 'other views.' 'On other country' should be 'in other countries.' 'Explores the new thinking' is awkward; use 'to broaden my perspective.' 'Capture it in my camera for photograph' should be 'capture them with my camera.' Ensure plural agreement between 'views' and pronoun 'them.'