视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make the answer more concise and fix minor word choice/grammar issues. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific example and a linking phrase. Avoid repetition (e.g., 'preserve good memories' and 'remember the places').

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because they capture natural beauty and lasting travel memories. For example, I photographed a lakeside sunrise last year, which now reminds me of that peaceful morning and the small fishing village I stayed in.

建議: Use a clear topic sentence and correct grammar (subject-verb agreement). Add one specific detail to support your preference and use a linking word for coherence. Keep it within three sentences.

範例: I prefer rural views because I grew up near the countryside and find the peaceful landscapes and fresh air relaxing. For instance, walking through nearby fields and seeing rolling hills helps me unwind after a busy week.

建議: Be concise and correct vocabulary/typos («I I», 'reviews' → 'views'). Provide a direct preference or say you like both with a clear reason and one specific example. Use a linking phrase to compare.

範例: I like both, but I slightly prefer views in my own country because they feel familiar and culturally rich. However, I also enjoy foreign landscapes; for example, hiking a mountain range abroad once gave me a fresh perspective and memorable scenery.

× It always make me more relaxed.

✓ It always makes me more relaxed.

Subject-verb agreement requires the third person singular subject 'it' to take the verb with an -s in the present simple tense. Replace 'make' with 'makes'. To improve, always check that singular third-person subjects (he/she/it) pair with verbs ending in -s or -es in present simple.

× they help me relieve the best moments and remember the places I visited.

✓ they help me relive the best moments and remember the places I visited.

The student used 'relieve' (to remove pain or stress) instead of the correct verb 'relive' (to experience again). Use 'relive' when talking about experiencing pleasant memories again. To improve, pay attention to commonly confused word pairs and verify meanings before using them.

× I appreciate the view of my country because it's more familiar and full of cultures.

✓ I appreciate the views of my country because they're more familiar and full of culture.

Plural 'views' is more natural when talking about different sights; therefore verb and pronoun agreement should match ('views' with 'they're'). Also 'full of cultures' is awkward; use 'full of culture' or 'rich in culture'. Ensure noun number matches verb/pronoun and choose the proper collocation ('full of culture' or 'rich in culture').

× Well, I also enjoy visiting other countries because I I like exploring different coastal reviews and mountain ranges and they offer me new experiences.

✓ Well, I also enjoy visiting other countries because I like exploring different coastal views and mountain ranges, and they offer me new experiences.

Errors include a duplicated 'I', the incorrect word 'reviews' instead of 'views', and a run-on structure lacking proper punctuation. Remove the duplicate 'I', replace 'reviews' with 'views', and add a comma before 'and' to separate clauses. To improve, read sentences aloud to catch duplicates and incorrect word choices; use commas to join independent clauses correctly.