视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cố gắng nói rõ ràng hơn và tránh tiếng ậm ừ (ví dụ: “MMM”). Sử dụng câu chủ đề trực tiếp rồi phát triển bằng một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể (tại sao bạn thích chụp ảnh, một ví dụ ngắn). Chú ý phát âm (ví dụ: "special" thay cho "especial MO") và ngữ pháp (thứ tự từ: "remember places you have been"). Giữ độ dài dưới 5 câu và dùng liên từ để nối ý.

範例: Honestly, I really enjoy taking pictures because they help me preserve special memories and recall places I've visited. For example, I often photograph city skylines or sunsets to remember the atmosphere of a trip.

建議: Trả lời rõ ràng rồi mở rộng bằng lý do cụ thể. Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng: dùng "suits" hoặc "is suitable for me" thay cho "very fit for me"; số nhiều khi nói chung: "rural areas". Thêm liên từ để mạch lạc (e.g., "because", "so"). Giữ ngắn gọn trong 2–3 câu.

範例: I prefer rural areas because they offer a peaceful atmosphere and beautiful scenery. I don't enjoy noisy places, so living in the countryside suits me better for relaxing and spending time outdoors.

建議: Cần trả lời trực tiếp là thích trong nước hay nước ngoài, sau đó bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể. Tránh sử dụng thì không nhất quán ("had" → "has") và ngừng câu giữa chừng; tránh tiếng ậm ừ ("uh"). Liệt kê chi tiết bằng câu hoàn chỉnh và dùng liên từ để nối ý ("for example", "so"). Giữ tối đa 5 câu và đưa một kết luận ngắn.

範例: I prefer views in my own country because my hometown has beautiful landscapes. For example, there are mountains and a river nearby, so after a busy day I can ride my bike and relax by the water.

× MMM to be honest I really love taking pictures because when you take photos you can preserve especial MO memories and remember the place you have been.

✓ MMM to be honest I really love taking pictures because when you take photos you can preserve special memories and remember the places you have been.

The main issue is word choice/spelling 'especial MO' which should be 'special'. Also 'place' should be plural 'places' to match the general meaning of visiting multiple locations; this is a singular/plural agreement related to countable nouns used after 'remember'. Use 'taking pictures' (verb + -ing) is correct here; only replace incorrect words and make 'places' plural for clarity. Suggestion: Replace misspelled words, use plural for general references to locations (places), and keep the -ing form 'taking' as it correctly expresses the activity.

× Personally, I love living in rural areas because it has a peaceful atmosphere and beautiful scenery. I don't like a noisy place so I think rural area is very fit for me.

✓ Personally, I love living in rural areas because they have a peaceful atmosphere and beautiful scenery. I don't like noisy places so I think rural areas are very suitable for me.

The subject 'rural areas' is plural, so the verb and pronoun must match: use 'they have' not 'it has'. Also 'a noisy place' should be plural 'noisy places' to match the generalization. 'Very fit for me' is unnatural; use 'very suitable for me'. Suggestion: Ensure subjects and verbs agree in number; when talking generally about multiple locations use plural nouns and matching verbs ('they have', 'places are').

× Actually, I really love my hometown because it had a beautiful view there. It has mountain, river and after a busy day, I can ride my bike, uh, go outside and.

✓ Actually, I really love my hometown because it has beautiful views. It has mountains and rivers, and after a busy day I can ride my bike and go outside.

The sentence mixes past tense 'had' with present tense 'I really love', which is inconsistent; use present 'has' to describe a current characteristic. 'Mountain, river' should be plural and parallel: 'mountains and rivers'. The final clause was incomplete and had redundant filler 'uh' and trailing 'and.' Suggestion: Keep tense consistent when describing ongoing facts (use present tense), make nouns parallel and plural when appropriate, and complete the coordination ('ride my bike and go outside').