视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make the answer more natural and concise, give a brief reason or example to support your statement, and avoid repeating the word “photographer.” Use one clear topic sentence then one supporting detail. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

範例: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views because photography is my profession and passion. For example, I enjoy shooting landscapes and street scenes to document everyday life and interesting light. This helps me improve composition and tell visual stories.

建議: Be more fluent and specific: remove filler words (uh), correct grammar, and give one or two concrete reasons or examples explaining why urban views appeal to you. Use linking words like “because” and “for example.” Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

範例: I prefer urban areas because cities offer diverse subjects and abstract compositions. For example, I often shoot reflections in glass buildings and contrasting street scenes, which give me more creative options than rural landscapes.

建議: Start with a clear, direct topic sentence (Yes/No or I prefer…), avoid repetition, fix grammar, and be specific about advantages of photographing at home (access, local knowledge, relationships). Remove incomplete trailing phrases. Limit to 2–3 sentences and use linking words like “because” and “so.”

範例: I prefer photographing in my own country because I know the best locations and can return at the right time for good light. For instance, I can visit a market I scouted earlier to capture candid portraits during golden hour, which I couldn’t easily do abroad.

× Yes, I am a photographer, and a photographer loves to capture everything she or he sees.

✓ Yes, I am a photographer, and a photographer loves to capture everything she or he sees.

No correction needed for third person singular here; 'a photographer loves' is correct. Keep as is.

× I prefer urban areas because we can find more abstract pictures in these areas and, uh, as a photographer, I love to photograph in a city that have, uh, many subjects to be captured.

✓ I prefer urban areas because we can find more abstract pictures in these areas and, as a photographer, I love to photograph in a city that has many subjects to be captured.

The verb must agree with the singular subject 'a city'. 'Have' is plural; use 'has' for third person singular. Remove filler 'uh' for fluency. Suggestion: use 'a city that has many subjects to capture' or 'a city with many subjects to capture.'

× No, I I'm more likely to take pictures of my own country because I'm familiar with my own country and I can find whatever I need to capture in my own country and I can go to the spots that I found and months ago or.

✓ No, I'm more likely to take pictures of my own country because I'm familiar with it, I can find what I need to capture there, and I can go to the spots I found months ago.

Multiple issues: repetition and awkward tense use. 'I found and months ago or' is ungrammatical. Use present perfect or simple past appropriately: 'I found months ago' is simple past and fits. Replace repeated 'my own country' with pronoun 'it' for naturalness. Remove trailing 'or'. Also combine clauses with commas and 'and' for clarity.