视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be clearer and more grammatical: start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Reduce repetition and avoid filler words. Focus on correct verb forms and word choice (e.g., “taking pictures” not “May taking picture”).

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I often photograph beaches from different angles to capture the lighting and background, which creates lasting memories. In addition, I try to frame shots carefully so the scene looks balanced and interesting.

建議: Answer directly and give specific reasons with linking words. Use correct grammar (e.g., “I prefer capturing pictures in rural areas because they offer…”). Avoid vague phrases like “a lot of I don't know”. Provide one or two concrete examples of what you like in rural scenes.

範例: I prefer taking pictures in rural areas because they offer peaceful landscapes and natural details. For instance, I enjoy photographing rolling hills and traditional farms, which often have strong colors and interesting textures that make photos more appealing.

建議: Start with a clear direct answer, then contrast with specific examples using linking words (e.g., “However” or “also”). Correct article and preposition use (“in Britain”, “in Japan”, “an opportunity”) and avoid repetition. Be specific about what you like photographing in each place.

範例: I like taking pictures both in my country and abroad. In my country I particularly enjoy photographing mountains because they offer dramatic views and changing light. However, I also love shooting city scenes in places like Tokyo and Britain, where architecture and street life provide interesting subjects.

× May taking picture create big moment in our life, Good memory.

✓ Maybe taking pictures creates big moments in our life and good memories.

The modal-like word 'May' is incorrect; use 'Maybe' (adverb). 'taking picture' requires gerund with plural 'pictures' to match general statement. Use present simple 'creates' for general truths and plural 'moments' and 'memories'. Also join clauses with 'and' for coherence. Suggestions: replace 'May' with 'Maybe', use plural nouns 'pictures', 'moments', 'memories', and use present simple verb 'creates'.

× It's something unforgi unforgivable, unforgettable.

✓ It's something unforgivable, unforgettable.

The student repeated 'unforgi' as a fragment and intended 'unforgivable'. Use the correct adjective 'unforgivable' and 'unforgettable'. Suggestion: remove the broken fragment and use correct spelling for adjectives.

× So I like it especially when when I capture picture with different angle in on beach, on good views behind me, but good background.

✓ I especially like it when I capture pictures from different angles on the beach with good views and a nice background behind me.

Use plural 'pictures' and 'angles' for general activities. 'Capture' is fine in present simple for habitual actions. Prepositions were mixed ('in on beach'); use 'on the beach'. Include articles 'the' and 'a' appropriately. Remove duplicate 'when'. Suggestions: use plural nouns, correct prepositions ('on the beach'), add articles, and simplify word order.

× I think I love to capturing picture with in rural area because it's look like beautiful good view, good back, good background and also there are there are a lot of I don't know and let's.

✓ I think I love capturing pictures in rural areas because they look beautiful and have good backgrounds, and there are many things to see.

After 'love' with an action, use the base form or gerund; 'love capturing' is correct. Use plural 'pictures' and 'rural areas'. 'It's look like' is incorrect; use 'they look' to refer to pictures or 'they' for plural. 'Good back' is incorrect; use 'good background'. Remove repetition 'there are there are' and replace vague phrase with 'many things to see'. Suggestions: use 'love capturing', plural nouns, correct subject-verb agreement, and clearer vocabulary.

× I like both because my country is very gorgeous.

✓ I like both because my country is very beautiful.

'Gorgeous' is grammatically acceptable but sounds slightly off in this context; 'beautiful' is more natural. No tense change needed; this is a stylistic suggestion rather than a strict grammar error. Suggestion: prefer 'beautiful' for natural speech.

× I do like taking picture in my country, especially in the in the mountains.

✓ I do like taking pictures in my country, especially in the mountains.

Use plural 'pictures' for general activity and remove duplicate 'the'. Suggestion: use plural nouns and avoid duplicated words.

× We have a lot of mountains in here.

✓ We have a lot of mountains here.

'In here' is redundant; use 'here'. Present simple 'have' is correct. Suggestion: use 'here' instead of 'in here'.

× It's give us a good view.

✓ They give us a good view.

'It' is incorrect when referring back to plural 'mountains'; use 'they'. Also use present simple 'give'. Suggestion: ensure pronoun agrees in number with its antecedent.

× Also I like take a picture in Tokyo, in Britannia, British and also Japan.

✓ Also I like to take pictures in Tokyo, Britain, and Japan.

Use 'like to take' or 'like taking'; choose one form. Use plural 'pictures'. 'Britannia' is incorrect name; use 'Britain' or 'the UK'. Remove redundant 'British'. Suggestion: use consistent verb form, correct country names, and plural nouns.

× I love to do that if I have a opportunity.

✓ I would love to do that if I had the opportunity.

This conditional requires 'would' plus past tense 'had' for a hypothetical desire. Use 'the opportunity' with the definite article. 'A opportunity' is ungrammatical; 'an opportunity' if using indefinite. Suggestion: use 'I would love to do that if I had the opportunity' for polite hypothetical statements.