视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear and natural, and directly responds to the question. To improve, add one brief reason or example to make the answer more informative and use a linking word to connect ideas. Also avoid redundancy ("moments and views" is slightly repetitive after mentioning photography as a hobby).

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because photography is one of my main hobbies; for example, I often photograph sunsets at the local lake to capture changing light and colours.

建議: The response answers the question and gives a reason, but it is slightly wordy and uses repetitive descriptors ("beautiful scenery" and "landscape is quite attractive"). Improve by using a linking word and a specific detail to support your preference, and shorten the reply to sound more natural.

範例: I prefer rural views because they offer peaceful, open landscapes; for instance, I like photographing rolling hills and fields where the natural colours and textures change through the seasons.

建議: Your answer is balanced and natural, but includes filler phrasing ("something that always interests me a lot"). Improve by giving a concise reason for preferring domestic views and a specific example of what interests you about foreign scenery, using a linking word to contrast the ideas.

範例: I generally prefer views in my country because I'm familiar with the landscapes and cultural context; however, I’m also curious about foreign scenery, for example, visiting coastal cliffs abroad to see different geological formations and plant life.

× Definitely because photography is one of my hobbies and I do like capturing moments and views.

✓ Definitely, because photography is one of my hobbies and I like capturing moments and views.

The phrase 'do like' is grammatically acceptable for emphasis but is unnecessary in neutral responses; keep simple present 'like' to match conversational register. Remove 'do' to avoid awkward emphasis. Suggestion: Use 'I like' instead of 'I do like' unless you intend strong emphasis.

× I prefer views in rural areas over urban areas and that is majorly because rural areas have beautiful scenery as well as the landscape is quite attractive.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas to those in urban areas, mainly because rural areas have beautiful scenery and attractive landscapes.

Use 'prefer A to B' not 'prefer A over B' for clarity; 'majorly' is informal/incorrect here—use 'mainly'. 'As well as' was awkward; better coordinate with 'and'. Also change 'the landscape is quite attractive' to plural 'attractive landscapes' to match 'rural areas'. Suggestion: Use 'prefer A to B', 'mainly', and keep noun agreement (landscapes).

× I prefer views in my country, but travelling to another country and exploring the atmosphere and the scenery over there is something that always interests me a lot.

✓ I prefer views in my country, but travelling to other countries and exploring the atmosphere and scenery there always interests me.

Use plural 'other countries' to match general meaning; 'the scenery over there' is wordy—use 'scenery there'. 'Something that always interests me a lot' is redundant: combine to 'always interests me'. Also use present simple 'interests' to agree with subject 'travelling... exploring'. Suggestion: Remove redundancy, ensure subject-verb agreement, and prefer concise phrasing.