服装— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Focus on correct grammar and concise phrasing. Start with a clear topic sentence, use the simple present correctly, and add one brief supporting detail. Avoid repetition.

範例: I usually wear casual clothes because they are comfortable and easy to move in. For example, I often choose jeans and a T-shirt for everyday activities.

建議: Use correct verb forms and pronouns, and combine sentences for fluency. Give a specific reason and an example with a linking word (because/so) to show coherence.

範例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they help me feel relaxed during the day. For instance, I usually wear sneakers and a hoodie when I'm working or meeting friends.

建議: Correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, gerunds) and word choice. Keep it concise and give one clear benefit with a comparison. Use linking words like because and so.

範例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and easy to wash. So I often choose a T-shirt instead of a sweater when the weather is warm.

建議: Improve sentence structure and tense consistency. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then explain briefly why with a specific detail. Avoid awkward phrasing like 'I studied about fashion' — say 'I studied fashion' or 'I know what suits me.'

範例: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I studied fashion and know what suits me. Usually it takes me only a few minutes to decide the colors and style.

建議: Use correct negatives and complete the thought. Provide one clear contrast and an example of when you change your style. Keep it within 3–4 sentences and use linking words like 'but' and 'however'.

範例: I usually wear the same style on weekdays and weekends, but I dress up if I have special plans. For example, I might wear a shirt and nice shoes when going to a fancy restaurant.

建議: Clarify vocabulary and use correct prepositions and tense. Say colors directly (e.g., 'I like black and white') and explain reasons concisely with seasonal contrast. Avoid unclear words like 'Erica'.

範例: I like simple colors, especially black and white. For example, I prefer white clothes in summer because they feel cooler, and black in winter because they look warmer and match other layers.

× I'm usually wearing casual clothes.

✓ I usually wear casual clothes.

The original uses the progressive form 'am wearing' to describe a habitual action. Habitual actions in present tense should use the simple present: 'I usually wear'. Use progressive only for actions happening now.

× I prepare to casual clothes rather than suit or dress.

✓ I prefer casual clothes to a suit or dress.

'Prepare to' is incorrect for expressing preference. Use 'prefer A to B'. Also include articles for singular countable nouns: 'a suit' and 'a dress'. This fixes word choice and sentence structure.

× So I usually wearing.

✓ So I usually do.

The fragment 'I usually wearing' lacks the correct verb form. To convey the idea 'I usually do (that)', use 'I usually do' or repeat the verb: 'I usually wear casual clothes.' Avoid '-ing' without auxiliary.

× It's make me feel more comfortable.

✓ It makes me feel more comfortable.

Subject-verb agreement in simple present requires 'makes' for third-person singular subject 'It'. Use 'makes' not 'make'.

× So I would like to wear casual clothes rather than smart clothes.

✓ So I would like to wear casual clothes rather than smart clothes.

This sentence is correct and matches the context, so no change is needed. It uses appropriate modal 'would like' for preference.

× Yes, I do like wearing T-shirts because it makes me feel comfortable and also I can washing T-shirts easier than other clothes so I prefer to wear T-shirts rather than sweater or jumper.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they make me feel comfortable, and I can wash T-shirts more easily than other clothes, so I prefer to wear T-shirts rather than a sweater or jumper.

Multiple issues: 'do like' is unnecessary—simple 'like' is natural. 'It makes' should agree with plural 'T-shirts' so 'they make'. 'Can washing' is incorrect: after 'can' use base form 'wash'. Use comparative adverb 'more easily' rather than 'easier' when modifying a verb. Also add articles 'a sweater' or 'a jumper' for countable nouns.

× I don't usually spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I studied about fashion so I know about how to I wear the clothes.

✓ I don't usually spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I studied fashion, so I know how to wear clothes.

Mixes past and present awkwardly: 'studied about fashion' should be 'studied fashion' (no 'about'), and 'I know about how to I wear the clothes' is ungrammatical—use 'I know how to wear clothes'. Keep tenses consistent: past simple 'studied' is okay if followed by present 'I know' for current knowledge.

× So I usually just a few minutes decided the color mix and then wearing.

✓ So I usually decide on the color mix in just a few minutes and then put my outfit on.

Original lacks proper verb forms: 'just a few minutes decided' is incorrect. Use 'decide on the color mix in just a few minutes'. 'Then wearing' is incomplete; use 'then put my outfit on' or 'then get dressed'.

× I'm not wear the different style of clothes on weekday and weekends, but if I have a plan, it's like a former to go to the pub or go to the restaurant, fancy restaurant, I mean and I usually.

✓ I don't wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends, but if I have plans, for example to go to a pub or a fancy restaurant, I do change my style.

Use 'don't wear' (simple present negative) not 'I'm not wear'. Pluralize 'weekdays and weekends'. 'If I have a plan' → 'if I have plans' or 'if I have a plan' followed by 'for example' (not 'former'). 'A fancy restaurant' needs article. Finish the sentence with a clear verb: 'I do change my style'.

× I do like Erica but I prepare to wear the black or white.

✓ I do like brighter colors, but I prefer to wear black or white.

Original 'Erica' seems a typo for 'brighter' or another color term; inferred correction uses 'brighter colors'. 'Prepare to wear' is wrong—use 'prefer to wear'. Remove the definite article before color when speaking generally: 'wear black or white'. If 'Erica' was intended as a name, clarify meaning.

× Usually in the summer I prefer to wearing white color dress and in the winter I prefer to black color dress because of the weather.

✓ Usually in the summer I prefer wearing white dresses, and in the winter I prefer wearing black dresses because of the weather.

After 'prefer' you can use the gerund 'wearing' or the infinitive 'to wear' but the original 'prefer to wearing' is incorrect. Use plural 'dresses' for general statements. Also 'white color dress' is unnatural—use 'white dresses' or 'a white dress' depending on meaning.