学校— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is too long and somewhat unclear, especially the phrase 'to reach the earth' which seems incorrect. Try to be more concise and directly answer the question by stating where your school is located. Avoid unnecessary details and unclear expressions.

範例: I completed my schooling in my hometown in my home country. It was a local school about 15 minutes away from my house by car.

建議: Your answer has good content but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy, such as repeating 'with my friends'. Also, 'caught a lot of knowledge' is unnatural. Try to use simpler, clearer expressions and avoid repeating the same idea.

範例: Yes, I really like my school because I have many fond memories with my friends there. It was also the first place where I learned a lot of important things.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes, such as 'one of the repeated school' and 'good stuff'. Also, the phrase 'Yes, you are' is inappropriate here. Try to directly answer the question with clear reasons and use appropriate vocabulary.

範例: Yes, I think my school is a good place to study because it offers a variety of extracurricular activities and has experienced teachers who support students' learning.

建議: Your answer is generally clear but contains some errors, such as 'principle' instead of 'principal'. Also, the sentence structure can be improved for better flow. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: The environment at my school was very disciplined. The teachers, principal, and students all behaved respectfully, and the school focused on developing students' skills and abilities.

建議: Your answer addresses the question well but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct subject-verb agreement and clearer expressions. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

範例: In my opinion, interest is very important in studying. If a student is interested in a subject, they are more likely to perform well in it compared to subjects they find less interesting.

× At the moment I study in university, but I done my schooling back in my home country about six years ago and my school was situated in my hometown where I live, and it took me just 15 minutes to travel by car to reach the earth.

✓ At the moment I study at university, but I did my schooling back in my home country about six years ago and my school was situated in my hometown where I live, and it took me just 15 minutes to travel by car to reach the earth.

The verb 'done' is incorrect here because it is the past participle form and requires an auxiliary verb. The correct simple past tense form 'did' should be used to indicate a completed action in the past. Also, 'study in university' should be 'study at university' as the correct preposition is 'at' for institutions.

× At the moment I study in university, but I done my schooling back in my home country about six years ago and my school was situated in my hometown where I live, and it took me just 15 minutes to travel by car to reach the earth.

✓ At the moment I study at university, but I did my schooling back in my home country about six years ago and my school was situated in my hometown where I live, and it took me just 15 minutes to travel by car to reach the earth.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to studying at an institution; the correct preposition is 'at'. This is a common collocation in English.

× So I love my school alot an moreover it was the first institution where I caught a lot of knowledge from.

✓ So I love my school a lot and moreover it was the first institution where I gained a lot of knowledge.

The word 'alot' is incorrect; it should be two words 'a lot'. Also, 'an' should be 'and'. The phrase 'caught a lot of knowledge from' is awkward; 'gained a lot of knowledge' is more appropriate.

× Definitely there are plethora of memories of mine with my friends which I have spent time with my friends on in the school.

✓ Definitely there is a plethora of memories of mine with my friends with whom I have spent time in school.

'Plethora' is singular and requires 'is' instead of 'are'. Also, the sentence structure is awkward; 'with whom I have spent time' is the correct relative pronoun usage. The preposition 'on' is unnecessary here.

× Definitely there are plethora of memories of mine with my friends which I have spent time with my friends on in the school.

✓ Definitely there is a plethora of memories of mine with my friends with whom I have spent time in school.

The phrase 'spent time with my friends on in the school' is redundant and awkward. It should be simplified to 'spent time in school with my friends' or 'with whom I have spent time in school' for clarity and correctness.

× Yes, you are. My school was one of the repeated school in the town and I always recommend the upcoming generations as well to get enrolled in that school because of the good stuff and the. Importance of curricular activities there.

✓ Yes, it is. My school was one of the reputed schools in the town and I always recommend the upcoming generations to get enrolled in that school because of the good staff and the importance of extracurricular activities there.

'Yes, you are' is incorrect as the question is about the school, so 'Yes, it is' is correct. 'Repeated school' is likely a typo for 'reputed school'. 'Stuff' should be 'staff' when referring to personnel. 'Curricular activities' should be 'extracurricular activities' to mean activities outside the curriculum.

× The involvement in my school was very disciplined.

✓ The environment in my school was very disciplined.

'Involvement' is not the correct noun here; 'environment' better describes the general atmosphere or setting of the school.

× The teachers, the principle and the students always behaved in a disciplined manner and moreover focus is always to build capabilities of the students.

✓ The teachers, the principal, and the students always behaved in a disciplined manner and moreover the focus is always to build the capabilities of the students.

'Principle' is a noun meaning a rule or belief; the correct word for the head of a school is 'principal'. Also, 'focus is always to build capabilities' needs the definite article 'the' before 'focus' and 'capabilities'.

× According to my view, I think the level of education one can get depends highly on the interest one have.

✓ According to my view, I think the level of education one can get depends highly on the interest one has.

The pronoun 'one' requires the verb form 'has' for third person singular, not 'have'.

× If a student will have interest in one subject then definitely he will do good in that particular subject in comparison of others.

✓ If a student has interest in one subject, then definitely he will do well in that particular subject in comparison to others.

'Will have' is incorrect in the 'if' clause; the present simple 'has' should be used. 'Do good' should be 'do well' as 'well' is the correct adverb. 'In comparison of others' should be 'in comparison to others'.