学校— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a clear, direct location and avoid redundancy. Use simple, correct sentences and provide specific details about the location and popularity.

範例: My school is located near the market area, about 2 kilometers from my home. It is one of the most popular schools in our area because many students study there.

建議: Your answer shows positive feelings but is repetitive and incomplete. Use clear sentences with correct grammar and avoid repeating words. Add linking words to connect ideas logically.

範例: Yes, I definitely like my school because my friends are very friendly and helpful. Also, the teachers are kind and teach us carefully, which makes learning enjoyable.

建議: Your answer has good ideas but is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Use proper sentence structure and linking words to explain why the environment is good for studying. Avoid incomplete sentences.

範例: Yes, I think my school is a good place to study because the environment is comfortable and quiet. This helps students concentrate better, so many students love studying here.

建議: Your answer is confusing and lacks clarity. Try to describe the environment clearly with correct grammar and specific details. Avoid irrelevant information and incomplete sentences.

範例: The environment at my school is very pleasant and cool. Because it is located on higher ground, the weather is nice, which makes studying comfortable.

建議: Your answer is unclear and difficult to understand. Try to express your opinion clearly using simple sentences and correct grammar. Explain why interest in study is important with examples.

範例: Interest in study is very important because it helps us learn new things and understand the world better. When we are interested, we enjoy studying and remember information more easily.

× It is best popular school in our site.

✓ It is the most popular school in our site.

The sentence lacks the definite article 'the' before 'best popular school' and uses 'best' incorrectly. The correct superlative form is 'the most popular school'. In English, superlative adjectives require 'the' before them.

× It's lots of students studying there that's why it is very most popular and it very located.

✓ There are lots of students studying there; that's why it is very popular and well located.

'It's lots of students' is incorrect because 'lots of students' is plural and requires 'there are' instead of 'it's'. Also, 'very most popular' is incorrect; 'very popular' or 'most popular' should be used. 'It very located' is incorrect; 'well located' is the correct phrase.

× It's far from my home 2 kilometers.

✓ It is 2 kilometers far from my home.

The phrase 'far from my home 2 kilometers' is awkward. The correct prepositional phrase is '2 kilometers far from my home' or 'It is 2 kilometers away from my home'.

× my student friends are very friendly.

✓ My student friends are very friendly.

The sentence is correct in plural form; no correction needed here.

× That's why also our school teacher are very friendly.

✓ That's why our school teachers are very friendly.

'Teacher' is singular but 'are' is plural. Since 'teachers' is plural, the verb 'are' is correct. The sentence needs plural 'teachers' to match the verb.

× They always try to try to teach, teach our students, teach students very carefully.

✓ They always try to teach our students very carefully.

The repetition 'try to try to teach, teach' is redundant and incorrect. Also, 'teach students' is better as 'teach our students' for clarity.

× That's why we always.

✓ That's why we always do well.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb or object. Adding 'do well' completes the thought.

× I think it is best place for teaching or studying because they are environment and very, very comfortable and this place has less noise.

✓ I think it is the best place for teaching or studying because the environment is very, very comfortable and this place has little noise.

'Best place' requires the definite article 'the'. 'They are environment' is incorrect; it should be 'the environment is'. 'Less noise' is better expressed as 'little noise' when referring to uncountable nouns.

× That's why every students love this school and also I am a big fan of this school.

✓ That's why every student loves this school and also I am a big fan of this school.

'Every' is followed by a singular noun 'student' and singular verb 'loves'. 'Students' is plural and does not agree with 'every'.

× I never forget my.

✓ I will never forget my school.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an object. Adding 'school' completes the sentence meaningfully.

× In our school environment, very cold and that's why in our school is the most popular in our school environment very well weather because our school is one of the high school in our site, it's maybe 21 kilometer in our.

✓ The environment in our school is very cold, and that's why our school is popular. The weather is very good because our school is one of the high schools in our area, maybe 21 kilometers away.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains incorrect adjective use ('very well weather' should be 'very good weather'). Also, 'one of the high school' should be 'one of the high schools'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity.

× Study how important I cannot I can't call them anyone because studying the most most good for our as a human because we know studying new things and we know our old PT world space.

✓ I cannot say how important study is, but studying is very good for us as humans because we learn new things and understand our world better.

The sentence has incorrect pronoun use and is confusing. 'I cannot I can't call them anyone' is unclear. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects pronoun and article usage.

× That's why he studies the most.

✓ That's why studying is very important.

'He studies the most' is unclear and does not fit the context. The correction provides a clearer and grammatically correct conclusion.