学校— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Rispondi in modo più diretto e organizzato: inizia con una frase che chiarisce subito che frequenti l'università, poi dai dettagli sul luogo e sul tempo di tragitto. Riduci le ripetizioni e correggi piccoli errori grammaticali (ad esempio "in car" → "by car").

範例: I don't attend school anymore; I study at university. My university is in Bergamo, a small city near Milan, and it takes me about five minutes to get there by car.

建議: Migliora la fluidità collegando le idee con connettori e fornendo un motivo concreto per il tuo gradimento. Evita ripetizioni come "I like" all'inizio di frasi consecutive.

範例: Yes, I enjoy my university a lot because I'm studying computer engineering. The courses on automation, control and coding are especially useful and interesting, since they directly relate to the career I want to pursue.

建議: Rendi la risposta più coerente e precisa: esprimi chiaramente i vantaggi e limiti dell'università usando connettivi (e.g. "although", "however") e evita frasi vaghe come "quite good and perfect".

範例: Yes, it's a good place to study. Although it's not a very famous or international university because it's in a small city, it meets my needs and offers the courses and support that suit my goals.

建議: Cerca di rispondere anche se la domanda è poco chiara: chiedi chiarimenti brevemente, poi prova a dare una descrizione generale dell'ambiente (fisico e sociale). Evita ripetizioni e frasi incomplete; mantieni la risposta entro 3-4 frasi.

範例: Do you mean the physical surroundings or the atmosphere? If you mean the atmosphere, it's friendly and focused: classrooms are modern and professors are approachable, while most students are hardworking and collaborate on group projects.

建議: Semplifica e struttura la risposta: inizia con una frase chiara che esprima la tua opinione, poi spiega il motivo con esempi o conseguenze. Evita ripetizioni e lessico colloquiale come "gonna"; usa un registro più formale.

範例: In my view, interest is fundamental for study. If you're not interested in your subject, you are less motivated to work hard, which makes it harder to achieve your goals and enjoy your future career.

× Now I don't attend school, I attend university and my university is really next to my house, so about 5 minutes on car and I really like it.

✓ I no longer attend school; I attend university, which is really next to my house, so it takes about five minutes by car, and I really like it.

The original sentence has run-on elements and awkward phrasing. Use 'no longer' to indicate stopping school, a relative clause 'which is really next to my house' to combine ideas, and the correct preposition 'by car'. Also spell out numbers in formal speech. Improve by using punctuation to separate clauses and correct prepositions. Suggestion: Break the ideas into clearer clauses, use 'no longer', 'which', and 'by car'.

× And this place in Bergamo, it's a small city near Milan in Italy.

✓ This place is Bergamo; it is a small city near Milan in Italy.

The phrase 'this place in Bergamo' is unclear. Use 'This place is Bergamo' or 'I live in Bergamo'. 'Near Milan in Italy' is acceptable, but placing 'in Italy' after 'near Milan' is more natural. Improve by stating the subject then location clearly.

× Yup, I really like my school.

✓ Yes, I really like my university.

The student previously said they do not attend school but university; using 'school' is inconsistent. Replace with 'university' for accuracy and consistency. Also 'Yup' is informal; use 'Yes' in formal testing.

× I like all the courses that I am attending now.

✓ I like all the courses that I am taking now.

In English, 'take a course' is the common collocation; while 'attend' can be used, 'attending' sounds awkward here. Use simple present progressive 'am taking' or present simple 'take'. Suggest: 'I like all the courses I am taking now.'

× I am studying at Computer Science engineering, so all the lessons about automation, control and coding are very useful and very interesting.

✓ I am studying computer science engineering, so the lessons about automation, control, and coding are very useful and interesting.

Do not capitalize common nouns like 'computer science engineering'. Use 'the lessons' when referring to specific subjects you study. Add commas in a list. Improve by using correct capitalization and definite article 'the' before 'lessons'.

× Yes, I think my school is a good place to study.

✓ Yes, I think my university is a good place to study.

Again consistency: the speaker attends a university, not 'school'. Replace 'school' with 'university' to match context.

× I know that is not the most famous school in all over the world.

✓ I know that it is not the most famous university in the world.

Use 'it is' rather than omitting the subject. 'In all over the world' is redundant; use 'in the world'. Also 'university' fits context. Improve by removing redundancy and adding the subject pronoun.

× It is situated in a small city, so it's not International University.

✓ It is located in a small city, so it is not an international university.

Use 'located' instead of 'situated' for natural speech; 'International University' should not be capitalized and needs an article 'an' before it. Improve by using lowercase and including the indefinite article.

× But yeah, for my goals this is quite good and perfect.

✓ But for my goals, it is quite good and suitable.

'Quite good and perfect' is contradictory; 'perfect' is extreme. Use a more measured adjective like 'suitable'. Also avoid informal 'yeah' in formal responses and add commas for clarity.

× I don't really understand the question.

✓ I don't really understand the question.

This sentence is grammatical; no change needed. Keep as is.

× What is the environment like at your school?

✓ What is the environment like at your university?

Change 'school' to 'university' for consistency with earlier statements.

× I think you I had to describe my my school describe in aesthetical way or describe most the behavior of professors or for other students.

✓ I think you mean I have to describe my university aesthetically, or describe the behavior of professors and other students.

The original has repetition ('you I', 'my my', 'describe') and incorrect word order. Use 'you mean' to clarify the examiner's intent, 'I have to' not 'I had to', and 'aesthetically' as the adverb. Remove duplicates and reorder phrases.

× Should you be more specific?

✓ Could you be more specific?

When asking the examiner to clarify, use 'could you' or 'would you' instead of 'should you'. 'Should you be more specific' is incorrect in this context. Use 'could' for polite requests.

× More specific please.

✓ Please be more specific.

Word order is incorrect; polite requests typically start with 'please' at the beginning or end after the verb. Use 'Please be more specific.'

× I from my perspective, interest in study is the base of all the university courses and all, all the degree.

✓ From my perspective, interest in studying is the basis of all university courses and degrees.

Incorrect word order: 'From my perspective' should start the sentence. Use 'interest in studying' (gerund) and 'basis' instead of 'base'. Remove redundant 'all, all' and pluralize 'degrees'. Improve by using natural collocations.

× If you don't have interest in the kind that you study in the courses, you will not reach your, your goal and you you're gonna make something that you really don't like, so it's useless.

✓ If you don't have an interest in what you are studying in your courses, you will not reach your goal, and you will end up doing something you really don't like, so it will be pointless.

Add the article 'an' before 'interest'. Use 'what you are studying' instead of 'the kind that you study'. Remove repetitive words and replace informal 'gonna' with 'will end up'. 'Useless' is better replaced by 'pointless' in this context. Improve by smoothing phrasing and using formal future tense.