学习— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và tự nhiên. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng và tránh lỗi phát âm hoặc từ không đúng. Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, dễ hiểu và tránh những từ không chính xác.

範例: I am currently a student studying at a well-known university in Hungary.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản và rõ ràng, đồng thời tránh lặp lại hoặc câu hỏi ngược lại người hỏi.

範例: I study at Trojan High School, which is one of the most popular high schools in Indiana city because of its good teaching and facilities.

建議: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời có tính logic và thêm chi tiết cụ thể để làm rõ ý.

範例: Definitely, it is a great place to study because it is located in Troy Point, and students here have excellent academic performance, which helps us learn from each other.

建議: Bạn nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy dùng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể về lý do bạn muốn thay đổi.

範例: Yes, I would like my school to install air conditioners in classrooms because each class has about 40 to 48 students, and it gets very hot, especially in summer, making it hard to concentrate.

建議: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm. Hãy sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu có cấu trúc tốt để diễn đạt kế hoạch tương lai của bạn một cách tự nhiên và hiệu quả.

範例: I have thought about my future studies, and after graduating high school, I plan to attend university to study Economics because I am interested in how money works and how businesses grow.

× Actually nails.

✓ Actually, I am Nails.

The original sentence lacks a subject and verb, making it incomplete and unclear. Adding 'I am' clarifies the subject and verb, forming a complete sentence.

× I am currently a student in Hungary in the famous higher scone in density.

✓ I am currently a student in Hungary at the famous higher school in Densely.

The phrase 'higher scone in density' is incorrect and unclear. It seems to be a mispronunciation or misspelling of 'higher school in Densely' or a similar place name. Correcting the noun and preposition usage improves clarity.

× Now I am studying in fact Trojan High School which is the one of the most common high school in Indiana city do too Is teaching and facility quality in here?

✓ Now I am studying at Trojan High School, which is one of the most common high schools in Indiana City due to its teaching and facility quality.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains a question within a statement, causing confusion. Rephrasing into a clear statement with correct prepositions and removing the question improves readability.

× Is it a good place to study?

✓ Is it a good place to study?

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× Definitely, yes. This is a very good place to study. You know of my school is the school has to hide it in Troy Point in my city. So every student in my school or have very good Academy performance so they can learn from each other. A lot of things.

✓ Definitely, yes. This is a very good place to study. You know, my school is located in Troy Point in my city. So every student in my school has very good academic performance, and they can learn a lot from each other.

The original sentences contain unclear phrases and grammatical errors such as 'school has to hide it' and 'or have very good Academy performance.' Correcting these to proper expressions and verb agreements improves clarity and grammar.

× Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?

✓ Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× Actually yes, I want my school chain a little thing is it that my school install air conditioner in a class.

✓ Actually, yes, I want my school to change a little thing, which is to install air conditioners in the classrooms.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains incorrect verb forms and structure. Rephrasing with correct infinitive form and plural noun improves clarity and grammar.

× You know each class will contain about 4248 students.

✓ You know, each class contains about 24 to 28 students.

The number '4248' is likely a typo or mispronunciation. Also, 'contain' should be 'contains' to agree with singular subject 'each class.' Correcting the number and verb agreement fixes the errors.

× So with a bigger male of student in the class we make the class is really hard and I can't stand in that hit so especially in summertime.

✓ So with a bigger number of students in the class, the classroom becomes really hot, and I can't stand the heat, especially in summertime.

The phrase 'bigger male of student' is incorrect; it should be 'bigger number of students.' Also, 'make the class is really hard' is incorrect; it should describe the classroom becoming hot. Correcting pronouns and expressions clarifies the meaning.

× Actually I have enough thought about that, but I think that I would if I graduated high school and I would tend to university to study Economix and really interested in how the money work and had business grow.

✓ Actually, I have thought enough about that, and I think that after I graduate from high school, I will attend university to study Economics because I am really interested in how money works and how businesses grow.

The original sentence has incorrect verb tenses and forms, such as 'would if I graduated' and 'would tend to university.' Correcting to future tense and proper verb forms improves grammatical accuracy.

× So I really want to study a bad management or the economix in the future.

✓ So I really want to study business management or economics in the future.

The phrase 'a bad management' is incorrect; it should be 'business management.' Also, 'economix' is a misspelling of 'economics.' Correcting these improves clarity and correctness.