自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Correct the grammar and make the answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, give one brief supporting detail, and avoid redundancy. Use linking words if adding details.

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle with training wheels when I was about six, and I rode it around my neighborhood every afternoon.

建議: Improve grammar (plural/singular and verb choice), tighten phrasing, and add one specific example or reason. Use a linking word to connect the main idea and the explanation.

範例: Not really. Most people prefer motorcycles, cars or public transport because cities are crowded and there is little cycling infrastructure, so cycling is uncommon for daily commuting.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The sentence mixes present tense 'have' with the past time marker 'when I was a child'. Use past tense 'had' to match the past time reference. Suggestion: always match verb tense to the time expression (e.g., use past simple for completed past events).

× No, I don't think bike are very popular in my country.

✓ No, I don't think bikes are very popular in my country.

The noun 'bike' should be plural 'bikes' to agree with the plural verb idea 'are'. The subject 'bikes' must match the plural verb form. Suggestion: use plural nouns when talking about things in general (bikes are).

× Most prefer to commit by motorcycle, car or public transport because the cities are busy and there isn't enough cycling infrastructure.

✓ Most people prefer to commute by motorcycle, car, or public transport because the cities are busy and there isn't enough cycling infrastructure.

The phrase 'prefer to commit by' is incorrect; likely intended verb is 'commute'. Also the subject 'Most' needs an explicit noun 'people' for clarity. Commas improve list readability. Suggestion: use 'commute' for travelling to work/places and include the noun after 'most' when it stands alone (most people).