自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Give a direct, grammatically correct answer and add one or two supporting details with linking words. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No), then explain briefly when you got it or how you used it. Keep it natural and within 3–4 sentences.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it for my seventh birthday and rode it every day after school. Because I lived near a park, I often cycled there with my friends, which helped me become more confident on the road.

建議: Provide a full sentence and expand with specific reasons and examples using linking words. Begin with a clear opinion, then explain why and give one concrete example or comparison. Aim for 2–3 sentences and use relevant vocabulary like commuting, environmentally friendly, or infrastructure.

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and errands. For example, cities have extensive bike lanes and affordable rental schemes, so students and office workers often prefer cycling to avoid traffic and save money.

× Since I had a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The original sentence begins with 'Since' which makes it a dependent clause lacking a main clause, so it is a sentence structure error (ID 26). The examiner's question expects a short affirmative answer. Replace the fragment with a complete sentence 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.' to provide a grammatically correct and context-appropriate response. Suggestion: begin with a clear subject and verb (Yes, I had...) rather than starting with a subordinating conjunction. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Very popular in my country. This is for transportation.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because people use them for transportation.

The original reply contains a sentence fragment 'Very popular in my country.' which lacks a subject and finite verb, and 'This is for transportation.' is unclear in reference and slightly awkward. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Provide a full sentence with subject and verb: 'bikes are very popular...' and clarify cause: 'because people use them for transportation.' Suggestion: combine ideas into a complete sentence and ensure pronoun reference is clear (use 'people' or 'they' referring to bikes). Grammar problem type ID:26