自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is short and contains a tense error. For a past experience question use past tense and give a brief reason or detail to be natural and effective. Keep it under 5 sentences, start with a topic sentence, then add one supporting detail with a linking word. For example, say whether you had one, why or why not, and one short related detail.

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I grew up in a small apartment building, so my parents thought it wasn’t safe to keep a bike there. As a result, I usually borrowed one from a friend when we wanted to ride together.

建議: The answer has grammar, word choice and clarity problems and sounds informal. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add a specific supporting detail using linking words (for example, because, for instance, or however). Use correct subject-verb agreement and plural forms. Keep it concise and natural.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For instance, most of my friends learned to ride when they were children, so cycling is a common pastime and a convenient way to get around in cities.

× No, I don't.

✓ No, I didn't.

The examiner asked about the past ('when you were a child'), so the student should use past tense. 'Don't' is present tense negative; the correct past negative form is 'didn't'. Use 'did not' or 'didn't' to refer to past events. Suggestion: Use past tense auxiliaries for past questions (e.g., 'No, I didn't').

× Yes Evie, it is because my all my friend know how to ride a bicycle and only mean that don't know how to ride it.

✓ Yes, Evie. It's because all my friends know how to ride a bicycle, and only a few people do not know how to ride one.

Several issues: word order and redundancy ('my all my' is incorrect), wrong verb form for plural subject ('friend know' should be 'friends know'), incorrect use of 'it' and 'mean', and awkward phrase 'only mean that don't know'. Also pronoun reference and article use are incorrect. The corrected sentence matches the present-tense question about general popularity. Suggestions: remove duplicated words, pluralize nouns when referring to multiple people, match verb form to plural subject (friends know), use 'only a few people' to express exception, and use 'do not' or 'don't' with a plural subject. Use 'one' or 'a bicycle' instead of 'it' when referring back to the noun.