自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Correct the factual error and phrasing, give a direct topic sentence then a brief supporting detail. Keep answers natural, concise (max 5 sentences) and avoid misused words (e.g. 'hide'). Use a linking word if you add a detail.

範例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. However, I often borrowed my neighbour’s bike to ride around the park on weekends. As a result, I still remember enjoying those short rides but never owned one until I was a teenager.

建議: Your answer is direct but add one or two specific supporting details using linking words to make it more convincing. Mention reasons or examples (e.g. transport, exercise, city infrastructure) while staying concise and natural.

範例: Yes, I strongly believe bikes are popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, cities have dedicated bike lanes and several bike-sharing schemes, so cycling is a convenient and affordable option for many residents.

× No, I didn't hide a bike when I was a child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The student used the verb 'hide' instead of the correct verb 'have' for possession. The question asked about possession in the past, so the correct past negative form is 'didn't have'. Suggestion: use the base verb after 'didn't' (did not + base verb), e.g., 'I didn't have a bike when I was a child.'

× Yes, I strongly believe that bikes are popular in my country.

✓ Yes, I strongly believe that bikes are popular in my country.

This sentence is grammatically correct. It uses the present simple 'believe' appropriately to state a general opinion and 'are popular' correctly for a present fact. No change is needed.