自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your response repeated the examiner's question instead of answering it. For Part 1 you should reply directly with a short clear statement (topic sentence) and then add one or two brief supporting details using linking words. Keep answers natural, avoid repetition, and limit to about 1–4 sentences.

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bicycle that I rode to visit friends and go to the park. Because it was light and easy to handle, I used it almost every day during summer.

建議: Your answer has relevant ideas but contains grammar errors, hesitations, and unclear phrases. Improve by giving a clear topic sentence, correct subject-verb agreement, and concise supporting details connected with linking words (e.g., "because", "so"). Be specific about why bikes are popular and give a short example. Aim for 2–3 sentences, avoid filler words like "umm," and correct word choice.

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For example, many people cycle to work or the market to avoid traffic and save money.

× Yes, in our country bikes is very popular.

✓ Yes, in our country bikes are very popular.

The subject 'bikes' is plural, so the verb must be plural as well; 'is' is singular. Use 'are' for plural subjects. Suggestion: identify the subject number (singular/plural) before choosing a verb form.

× Everyone uses bike for umm for travelling and it is very important for your you have a buy because it is very easy to travel in in a bike and also very useful to have you away from the classic and also.

✓ Everyone uses bikes for travelling and it is very important for you to have one because it is very easy to travel by bike and it also keeps you away from traffic.

Multiple errors corrected that match the allowed problem types: 1) 'bike' should be plural 'bikes' when referring to people in general (Singular and plural issue). 2) 'for travelling' is acceptable but 'travelling' as a noun is fine; kept. 3) 'for your you have a buy' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'for you to have one' using the infinitive 'to have' and the pronoun 'you' correctly (Incorrect use of pronouns and sentence structure errors). 4) 'travel in in a bike' is incorrect preposition and duplicated word; correct preposition is 'by' for modes of transport ('travel by bike') (Incorrect use of prepositions). 5) 'have you away from the classic' is unclear; interpreted as 'keeps you away from traffic' to make sense. Suggestions: break long ideas into shorter sentences, ensure noun number matches (bike vs bikes), use 'to have one' for possession, use 'by' with transport, and avoid repetition.'