自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer directly in English with a clear topic sentence and one or two supporting details. Keep it natural and concise (maximum 5 sentences). For example, state whether you had a bike, then add a specific detail such as how often you rode it, who taught you, or a short memory. Use linking words like “and” or “so” to connect ideas.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me when I was seven, and I used to ride it to school every day. It helped me feel independent and I remember riding with my friends in the park on weekends.

建議: Give a clear opinion and support it with specific reasons and examples. Avoid unclear phrases like “I worry like bike.” Instead, say why bikes are popular (e.g., affordable, convenient, eco-friendly) and mention who uses them or where. Use linking words such as “because,” “for example,” or “also” to make your answer coherent.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For example, many students and commuters use bicycles to avoid traffic, and cities often have bike lanes that make cycling safer.

× NI Xiao Shi Hu You.

✓ No, I didn't have one.

The original appears to be a transliteration and does not use correct English structure or pronouns. The question asked about past possession and requires a negative past response: use 'I' as the subject, the auxiliary 'did' for past tense, negation 'didn't', and the object 'one' (or 'a bike'). Suggestion: use 'No, I didn't have one' or 'No, I didn't have a bike.'

× Yes, I think so and I worry like bike.

✓ Yes, I think so and I would like a bike.

The original sentence uses 'worry like bike', which is ungrammatical. Likely the student intended to express preference or desire. Use 'would like' or 'like' with an article: 'a bike'. Also keep verb forms consistent: 'I think so, and I would like a bike' fits the present/future preference. Suggestion: use 'would like' for polite desires or 'I like bikes' to state preference.