自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Content is relevant and answers the question, but grammar, word choice and sentence structure need improvement. Fix tense and subject-verb agreement ("can makes" → "made" or "made me feel relaxing" → better: "made me feel relaxed"), avoid contractions in formal test speech ('cause → because), and reduce redundancy. Keep answer within 2–3 clear sentences: give a topic sentence, then one supporting detail with a linking word. Use a past simple form when referring to a childhood memory.

範例: Yes. I had a bicycle when I was eight because my father gave it to me as a birthday present. I loved riding it with my friends, and it always made me feel relaxed and free.

建議: Answer is direct and relevant but some grammar and word choice errors reduce clarity. Replace vague phrases and incorrect forms ("It's a very convenience" → "They are very convenient" or "Cycling is very common"). Use linking words to add a specific reason or example (for instance, mention bike-sharing or traffic conditions). Keep to 2–3 sentences and use a wider range of vocabulary (common, convenient, widespread, practical).

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in China. You can see people cycling to school and work, and bike-sharing services have made cycling even more widespread and convenient in cities.

× Yes, when I was 8 my father sent me a bicycle as my birthday gift, so I really enjoyed riding a bicycle with my friends 'cause it can makes me feel relaxed.

✓ Yes, when I was eight my father sent me a bicycle as my birthday gift, so I really enjoyed riding a bicycle with my friends because it made me feel relaxed.

Issues: 'can makes' is ungrammatical. This involves incorrect verb form and subject-verb agreement (third person singular with modal). According to the allowed problem types, treat as Singular and plural issue and Third person singular issue combined; here we list under Singular and plural issue (ID 1). Reason: 'can' is a modal verb and should be followed by the base form 'make', not 'makes'. Also the sentence refers to a past habitual experience, so the main verb should be in past tense: 'made' fits the past context. Suggestion: Use 'made' for past reference or 'made me feel' after 'so' and replace colloquial ''cause' with 'because'. Use 'can' only for general present ability (e.g., 'it can make me feel relaxed').

× Yes, when I was 8 my father sent me a bicycle as my birthday gift, so I really enjoyed riding a bicycle with my friends 'cause it can makes me feel relaxed.

✓ Yes, when I was eight my father sent me a bicycle as my birthday gift, so I really enjoyed riding a bicycle with my friends because it made me feel relaxed.

Issue: 'makes' is third person singular present tense but incorrectly follows the modal 'can'. Modals (can, could, will, etc.) require the base form of the verb, not the -s form. Also the context is past, so use past tense 'made'. Suggestion: Remove 'can' and use 'made' for past meaning, or if speaking about general effect use 'can make' (e.g., 'riding a bicycle with my friends can make me feel relaxed').

× Yes, of course. Actually, in China you can see people riding bicycles to school, to work and on the street everywhere. It's a very convenience.

✓ Yes, of course. Actually, in China you can see people riding bicycles to school, to work and on the street everywhere. It's very convenient.

Issue: Incorrect use of adjective/adverb form: 'convenience' is a noun; the sentence needs an adjective to describe 'it'. This falls under Present tense issue in the provided list; however it more precisely matches 'Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs' but per instruction we list present tense issue (ID 6). Reason: The copular construction 'It's ...' requires an adjective: 'convenient'. Suggestion: Replace 'a very convenience' with 'very convenient' or 'a great convenience' if you want a noun form (e.g., 'It's a great convenience that...').

× Actually, in China you can see people riding bicycles to school, to work and on the street everywhere.

✓ Actually, in China you can see people riding bicycles to school, to work, and everywhere on the streets.

Issue: Awkward word order and parallelism. This fits Sentence structure errors (ID 26). Reason: The list 'to school, to work and on the street everywhere' mixes prepositional phrases and places awkwardly. Suggestion: Keep parallel structure and natural word order: 'to school, to work, and everywhere on the streets' or '...on the streets everywhere' depending on emphasis.