自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Correct the grammar and make the answer more natural and slightly longer (1–2 sentences). Start with a clear topic sentence, then add a brief supporting detail. Use past tense for childhood and avoid redundancy.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I remember riding it to my friend’s house and practicing tricks in the park on weekends.

建議: Make the response more natural and cohesive by fixing minor grammar and repetition, using linking words, and giving a specific example. Keep it within 3–4 sentences: a topic sentence, a reason, and a short example.

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For example, many people ride to local markets to buy groceries, and young people often cycle together in the evenings for exercise and socializing.

× Yes, I have a bike when I'm a kid.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a kid.

The question asks about possession in the past (when you were a child), so the student must use past tense. 'Have' and 'I'm' are present tense; they should be 'had' and 'I was' to match past time. Suggestion: use past simple for both verbs when talking about past states: 'I had a bike when I was a kid.'

× We go on bikes to buy the groceries and we do biking in the neighborhood with friends.

✓ We rode bikes to buy groceries and we went biking in the neighborhood with friends.

The examiner asked about general popularity (present), but the student's previous answer placed them in the past (childhood). To be consistent with past context, verbs should be in past simple: 'go' -> 'rode' (or 'went'), 'buy the groceries' -> 'buy groceries' (article unnecessary), 'do biking' -> 'went biking'. Suggestion: keep tense consistent with context; use past simple for past habits: 'We rode bikes to buy groceries and went biking with friends.'

× I I enjoy riding with friends.

✓ I enjoyed riding with friends.

There is a duplicated pronoun 'I I' and present 'enjoy' conflicts with the past context. Remove duplication and change verb to past simple 'enjoyed' to match past-tense narrative. Suggestion: proofread to remove duplicates and maintain consistent tense: 'I enjoyed riding with friends.'