自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is short and unclear with grammatical errors and an irrelevant phrase (“when I am charged”). To improve: 1) Give a clear, direct topic sentence that answers the question. 2) Use past tense consistently for childhood. 3) Provide one or two specific supporting details linked with a connector (for example, because or so). 4) Keep it natural and within 2–4 sentences. Example improvements to focus on: correct tense (“I didn’t have a bike”), explain reason or alternative (e.g., my family couldn’t afford one or I learned on my brother’s bike).

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn’t afford one. However, I sometimes rode my friend’s bike in the neighborhood, so I still learned how to balance and enjoy cycling.

建議: Your answer answers the question but has grammar mistakes and an unclear word (“whites” likely intended “bikes”). To improve: 1) Use correct subject–verb agreement (“Yes, they are” or “Yes, bikes are”). 2) Give one specific reason or example (for instance, many people use them for short commutes or environmental reasons). 3) Use a linking word to add detail (for example, because, since, or for example). 4) Keep answers concise (2–3 sentences).

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, you can see many cyclists in the city center and students often ride to school to avoid traffic.

× No, I didn't have a bike when I am charged.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The student used present tense 'am charged' which is incorrect and unrelated. The question asks about a past habitual situation, so past simple 'didn't have' is correct and the time phrase should be 'when I was a child.' Replace 'am charged' with 'was a child' to match past tense and convey the intended meaning.

× Yes, it is. It is clear that whites are very popular in my country.

✓ Yes, they are. It is clear that bikes are very popular in my country.

The student wrote 'Yes, it is' which mismatches the plural subject 'bikes' in the question; subject-verb agreement requires 'they are.' Also 'whites' appears to be a typo for 'bikes.' Correct both: use plural pronoun 'they are' and the noun 'bikes' to agree with the question and maintain meaning.