自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make the sentence grammatically correct, be concise, and add a brief supporting detail. Use correct past tense and avoid redundancy. For example, start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No or statement), then add one specific detail about the bike or experience using a linking word.

範例: Yes. My father gave me a bright red bike when I was six, and I learned to ride it in our neighborhood park within a few weeks.

建議: Correct subject-verb agreement and be more precise rather than absolute claims. Add a reason or brief example using a linking word to support your opinion. Keep it to one topic sentence plus one supporting detail.

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular; by the time children are about seven many receive one because cycling is a common pastime and a convenient way to get around small distances.

× 'I remember when I was a child my dad had gave me a bike.'

✓ 'I remember when I was a child my dad had given me a bike.'

'Had gave' is incorrect because after the past perfect auxiliary had you must use the past participle form of the verb. The past participle of give is given, not gave. Use "had given" to indicate an action that occurred before another past point. Alternatively, if you simply mean a past event without the need for past perfect, use the simple past: "my dad gave me a bike.'

× 'Yes, all the children by age 7 wants to have a bike.'

✓ 'Yes, all the children by age 7 want to have a bike.'

'Children' is a plural noun, so the verb must be plural as well. The correct plural form of the present simple verb is want, not wants. Also consider a more natural phrasing: "By age seven, most children want a bike."