自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Correct the tense and make the response more natural and informative. Start with a clear topic sentence addressing the past (e.g., “Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.”), then give one or two brief supporting details (who gave it to you, how you used it, or a short memory). Use linking words if adding an extra detail (for example: “and,” “so,” or “which”). Keep it to a maximum of 3–4 short sentences.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents gave it to me for my eighth birthday, and I used it to ride to school every day. I remember racing my friends in the park, which was always great fun.

建議: Improve grammar and clarity, use more precise vocabulary (e.g., “ride” instead of “drive”), and add a specific reason or example. Begin with a direct opinion sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details connected with linking words such as “because,” “for example,” or “so.” Avoid vague phrasing like “with this.”

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are an affordable and convenient way to travel short distances. For example, many people ride bicycles to work or school to avoid traffic and save money on transport.

× Yes, I have a bike when I am.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The examiner asked about the past (when you were a child), so the student should use past tense. 'Have' is present tense and 'when I am' mixes present with a past time reference; use past simple 'had' and past 'was'. Also include the time phrase 'a child' to match the question. Suggestion: use past simple for completed past states: 'I had a bike when I was a child.'

× Bikes are popular in my country because with this we can easily drive.

✓ Bikes are popular in my country because we can travel easily with them.

The phrase 'with this' is incorrect and vague; use the pronoun 'them' to refer to bikes. 'Drive' is usually used for cars; for bikes use 'ride' or 'travel'. Also word order is more natural as 'travel easily with them' or 'ride them easily'. Suggestion: replace 'with this' with 'with them' and use 'travel' or 'ride' for bicycles: 'we can ride them easily' or 'we can travel easily with them.'