自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Correct the factual and lexical mistake, be concise, and directly answer the question. Use a clear topic sentence and one supporting detail if needed. For example, say whether you had a bike, explain briefly why you did or did not, and keep it to 1–2 sentences. Avoid unrelated words (e.g. 'wife').

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family couldn’t afford one, so I usually walked to school or used public transport.

建議: Improve grammar and provide a specific reason or example. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two supporting details using linking words (e.g. 'because', 'for example'). Also correct collocation errors like 'go to offices like schools' and 'and bikes'.

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are inexpensive and convenient. For example, many students and office workers ride bikes to school or work, especially in smaller towns.

× No, I didn't have a wife when I was a child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The student replied with 'wife' which is an incorrect lexical choice (pronoun/word misuse) for the question about a bike. The correct noun is 'bike'. Suggestion: listen to the question and use the same lexical field (bicycle/bike) when answering. Ensure pronouns and nouns match the referent in the question. Grammar problem type ID:12

× Yes, in my country bikes are very popular. Many people go to offices like schools or colleges and bikes.

✓ Yes, in my country bikes are very popular. Many people go to work or to school and college by bike.

The original second sentence is ungrammatical and unclear: 'go to offices like schools or colleges and bikes' mixes categories (offices, schools, colleges) and ends with a noun 'bikes' where a preposition phrase is required. The corrected sentence uses parallel structure ('go to work or to school and college') and the correct prepositional phrase 'by bike' to indicate transportation. Suggestion: keep parallel elements consistent, and use appropriate prepositions to show means of transport (by bike, by car, on foot). Also use singular 'school' and 'college' as institutions and 'bike' after 'by' (not 'bikes'). Grammar problem type ID:26