T恤衫— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more grammatically correct and concise. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid redundancy. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and then add supporting details with proper connectors.

範例: I wear T-shirts almost every day because they are comfortable and give me a stylish look. Moreover, they are easy to pair with different outfits, which I really like.

建議: Make sure your sentences are complete and clear. Avoid repetition and use linking words to organize your answer logically. Also, try to provide specific reasons or examples to support your answer.

範例: Yes, I often buy T-shirts, usually on weekends or when I go shopping. For instance, last week my mother and I went shopping, and I bought five T-shirts in my favourite colours because I needed new clothes for the upcoming season.

建議: Try to use more precise vocabulary and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific examples or reasons to support your answer.

範例: T-shirts are quite popular among all age groups, including older people in my country. They usually prefer simple yet stylish T-shirts that are comfortable and suit their personality, which makes them feel satisfied and confident.

建議: Focus on making your sentences grammatically correct and coherent. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide clear, specific details to enrich your answer.

範例: Yes, I wore T-shirts when I was a kid. My mother used to dress me in colourful T-shirts paired with pants, which looked elegant on me. She also took photos during that time, and those memories are very precious to me now.

× T-shirt become an essential part of my life nowadays I wear T-shirt on my daily basis because it not also give me but also give me a comfortable and you know aesthetic look which I really like the most.

✓ T-shirts have become an essential part of my life nowadays. I wear T-shirts on a daily basis because they not only give me comfort but also an aesthetic look which I really like the most.

The word 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' when referring to them generally. Also, 'become' should be 'have become' to match the present perfect tense indicating a change over time. 'It' should be 'they' to agree with the plural subject. The phrase 'not also give me but also give me' is incorrect; it should be 'not only give me... but also give me...'. 'On my daily basis' should be 'on a daily basis'. These corrections improve subject-verb agreement and pluralization.

× Definitely, as I said that T should become an essential part of my everyday basis.

✓ Definitely, as I said, T-shirts have become an essential part of my everyday life.

The singular 'T' is incorrect; it should be plural 'T-shirts' when speaking generally. 'Should become' is incorrect here; the present perfect 'have become' fits better to indicate a current state. 'Everyday basis' is better expressed as 'everyday life' for natural phrasing.

× So I definitely buy T-shirt every weekends or whenever I go for a shopping I grab just my favorite T-shirts colors.

✓ So I definitely buy T-shirts every weekend or whenever I go shopping, I grab my favorite T-shirt colors.

'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' when talking about buying multiple items. 'Every weekends' is incorrect; 'every weekend' is correct because 'every' is followed by singular noun. 'Go for a shopping' should be 'go shopping' as 'shopping' is uncountable here. 'Just my favorite T-shirts colors' is awkward; 'my favorite T-shirt colors' is clearer.

× Recently like last week my mother and I went for shopping and I grabbed 5T shirts for myself because now I am going for a.

✓ Recently, like last week, my mother and I went shopping and I grabbed 5 T-shirts for myself because now I am going for a...

'5T shirts' should be '5 T-shirts' with a space and plural form. 'Went for shopping' should be 'went shopping' as 'shopping' is uncountable. The sentence ends abruptly, but the correction focuses on grammar.

× Tshirt become an essential part to all age groups even for the older people.

✓ T-shirts have become an essential part for all age groups, even for older people.

'Tshirt' should be plural 'T-shirts'. 'Become' should be 'have become' to indicate present perfect tense. 'Part to all age groups' should be 'part for all age groups' for correct preposition usage.

× Like in my country, older people wear some basic casual and good looking T-shirts which not only suit our personality but also give them a sense of like satisfaction or comfortableness.

✓ In my country, older people wear some basic, casual, and good-looking T-shirts which not only suit their personality but also give them a sense of satisfaction or comfort.

'Like' at the start is informal and unnecessary. 'Good looking' should be hyphenated as 'good-looking'. 'Suit our personality' should be 'suit their personality' to agree with 'older people'. 'Comfortableness' is awkward; 'comfort' is better. The modal verb issue is minor here, but pronoun correction is important.

× Yes, I clearly remember that when I was a kid my mother used to wear me different kind of T-shirts with unique colors and paired with pants or trouser that look elegant in me.

✓ Yes, I clearly remember that when I was a kid, my mother used to dress me in different kinds of T-shirts with unique colors, paired with pants or trousers that looked elegant on me.

'Used to wear me' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'used to dress me in'. 'Different kind' should be plural 'different kinds' because it refers to multiple types. 'Trouser' should be plural 'trousers'. 'That look' should be past tense 'that looked' to match the past context. 'Elegant in me' should be 'elegant on me' for correct preposition.

× And even they took photos at that time which she remained as a memory now and I love that thing.

✓ And they even took photos at that time, which she has kept as a memory now, and I love that.

'Even they took' is better as 'they even took' for natural word order. 'Which she remained as a memory' is incorrect; it should be 'which she has kept as a memory' to indicate possession of the memory. 'I love that thing' is informal; 'I love that' is clearer.