T恤衫— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中有较多重复和语法错误，表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用连词使句子更连贯。

範例: I often wear T-shirts in the summer and sometimes in spring and autumn. I usually wear them two or three times a week because they are comfortable for daily activities like walking and studying.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议使用更准确的句子结构，并补充具体细节使内容更丰富。

範例: I don't buy T-shirts very often, maybe two or three times each season. I usually shop with my mom because there are no good malls near my university.

建議: 回答表达不流畅且有语法错误，建议简化句子并使用连接词，使表达更自然和连贯。

範例: In my country, older people don't often wear fashionable T-shirts. They prefer more comfortable clothes like loose shirts.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用正确的时态和简洁的句子结构，明确说明情况。

範例: Yes, I have worn T-shirts since I was a kid. For example, I had to wear them during activities in kindergarten and primary school.

× I now always frequently wear T-shirts in the summer and maybe in maybe maybe spring and autumn I always wear T-shirts two or three times a week because T-shirts is more soften for daily daily things such as walking and study.

✓ I now always frequently wear T-shirts in the summer and maybe in spring and autumn. I always wear T-shirts two or three times a week because T-shirts are softer for daily things such as walking and studying.

句子中“T-shirts is”应改为“T-shirts are”，因为“T-shirts”是复数，动词要与主语一致。"soften"应改为形容词“softer”，表示比较级。"study"应改为动名词“studying”，表示日常活动。

× Not very often, it may be two or three times a season because I always buy T-shirts together with my mom and not not buy it for myself. Especially I study in university, there's no malls and pleasant.

✓ Not very often, maybe two or three times a season because I always buy T-shirts together with my mom and do not buy them for myself. Especially since I study at university, there are no malls and it is not pleasant.

“study in university”应改为“study at university”，表示在大学学习的正确介词。"not not buy it"重复且代词单复数错误，应改为“do not buy them”。"there's no malls"应改为“there are no malls”，主谓一致。

× In my country they are not very much not many old people fashionable wearing T-shirts, because they are more prefer to wear some more comfortable shirts, more comfortable clothes.

✓ In my country, not many old people are fashionable wearing T-shirts because they prefer to wear more comfortable shirts and clothes.

“not very much not many old people fashionable wearing T-shirts”结构混乱，应简化为“not many old people are fashionable wearing T-shirts”。“more prefer”错误，应为“prefer”。

× Yes, I wear T-shirt since I was a kid, such as I want to join some activity in my kindergarten and some activity in my primary school, I have to wear T-shirts is more.

✓ Yes, I have worn T-shirts since I was a kid. For example, when I wanted to join some activities in my kindergarten and primary school, I had to wear T-shirts.

“I wear”应改为现在完成时“have worn”，表示从过去持续到现在的动作。"I want"应改为过去时“wanted”，与过去时间点一致。"I have to wear T-shirts is more"语法错误，改为“had to wear T-shirts”。