T恤衫— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer needs to be more natural and clear. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases like 'comfortable zone' and 'prefer to other my friends'. Also, try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words.

範例: I wear T-shirts every day because they are very comfortable. Moreover, I think T-shirts suit my personality better than shirts, and many of my friends also prefer wearing them.

建議: Your answer is a bit confusing and has grammatical errors. Try to answer directly, use linking words to connect ideas, and be specific about when and why you buy T-shirts.

範例: I don't buy T-shirts every day, but I usually purchase new ones at the beginning of summer. For instance, I buy several tan-coloured T-shirts because I wear them regularly during the hot season.

建議: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and incomplete. Try to use linking words to make your answer coherent and provide specific reasons or examples to support your points.

範例: In my country, T-shirts are quite popular among all age groups, including older people. This is because they find T-shirts comfortable, especially when they exercise regularly, so they prefer wearing T-shirts over other clothes.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains incomplete sentences. Try to give a clear topic sentence, explain your reasons logically, and avoid unnecessary repetition.

範例: Yes, I often wore T-shirts as a child because I liked playing outside. My mother also told me that T-shirts were my favourite clothes during my childhood because they were comfortable for active play.

× I wear T-shirts on my daily basis because it is a comfortable zone for me and I prefer to other my friends to wear T-shirts and uh, because in T-shirts person personalities more attractive than shirts.

✓ I wear T-shirts on a daily basis because they are comfortable for me and I prefer, like my friends, to wear T-shirts because in T-shirts, a person's personality is more attractive than in shirts.

The phrase 'on my daily basis' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'on a daily basis'. 'Prefer to other my friends' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer, like my friends,' or 'prefer as my friends do'. Also, 'person personalities more attractive' lacks a verb and article; it should be 'a person's personality is more attractive'. Prepositions and article usage need correction for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× No, not on every day but I buy T-shirts whenever I needed.

✓ No, not every day, but I buy T-shirts whenever I need them.

The phrase 'whenever I needed' incorrectly uses past tense 'needed' with 'whenever', which implies habitual action; present tense 'need' is appropriate here. Also, 'not on every day' should be 'not every day'. Modal verb usage and tense consistency are important for correct meaning.

× For example in the starting of summer season I prefer to build T-shirts like amount of tan T-shirts I wear in every summer season because I wear it's on regular basis of mine.

✓ For example, at the start of the summer season, I prefer to buy many tan T-shirts because I wear them regularly every summer.

'Build T-shirts like amount of tan T-shirts' is incorrect; 'buy many tan T-shirts' is correct. 'In the starting of summer season' should be 'at the start of the summer season'. 'I wear it's on regular basis of mine' is incorrect; it should be 'I wear them regularly'. Quantifiers and prepositions need correction for clarity and correctness.

× Well, mostly people of my country wear T-shirts. It is not only adult as well as older people also wear T-shirts because they found them comfortable in T-shirts and mostly older people do exercise in their daily routine so they prefer to wear T-shirt rather than.

✓ Well, most people in my country wear T-shirts. Not only adults but also older people wear T-shirts because they find them comfortable, and mostly older people exercise daily, so they prefer to wear T-shirts.

'Mostly people of my country' should be 'most people in my country'. 'It is not only adult as well as older people also wear' is incorrect; correct form is 'Not only adults but also older people wear'. 'They found' should be 'they find' for present tense. 'Prefer to wear T-shirt rather than' is incomplete; it should be 'prefer to wear T-shirts'. Pronoun and article usage need correction.

× Yes, I remember from my childhood mostly I wore T-shirts when I was scared because on my childhood I like to play that's why I prefer to T-shirts in my childhood and my and my mother also tell me about my childhood that's.

✓ Yes, I remember from my childhood that I mostly wore T-shirts when I was scared because I liked to play. That's why I preferred T-shirts in my childhood, and my mother also told me about my childhood.

'I like to play' should be past tense 'I liked to play' to match past context. 'I prefer to T-shirts' is incorrect; it should be 'I preferred T-shirts'. 'My mother also tell me' should be 'my mother also told me'. Past tense consistency is necessary for clarity and correctness.